Reviews for The Scar
DeathBlade1313 chapter 14 . 6/1
Why...hello everybody.

If you'll just give me a little bit more time to refresh myself on my original plans for the story as well as the mortal kombat games, I'll get right back to you ;)
KUUHAKU007 chapter 14 . 6/1
still waiting
xerobois chapter 14 . 5/26
Amazing story though haha.
xerobois chapter 14 . 5/26
Wow, just checked the reviews and I've noticed it's been ages since someone has left one.
Thesaiyan21 chapter 14 . 5/28/2019
Hey. Just wondering, this is a great story and with the release of MK11 I was wondering if You're gonna continue this or no? Just curious
anon chapter 14 . 4/29/2019
Some say that Jade is still explaining, to this day,
kingsj10 chapter 7 . 4/27/2019
Hes not gonna be able to learn enough, you've shown the skill gap to be too large.

So you're going to have to use artificial progression rather that simply making him better with a more realistic progression curve.

I dislike that decision, but it's your story and the rest is pretty good.

I feel like kitana would be more forward about Interaction with Kyle especially after you made it sound like she was drunk on love
mikaelefapiano19 chapter 1 . 4/25/2019
Good story keep it up
SilentType 1997 chapter 14 . 9/14/2018
Jade mentioned about Kyle being mortal while Kitana is edenian (Spoiler) if you seen the klassic tower ending for Johnny Cage in mkx, have Kitana bring Kyle to that place sometime in a future chapter where Kitana helps Kyle read the book that grants him edenian life.
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 14 . 5/30/2018
Oh snap dude, I’m sorry to hear about your financial situation. It’s been 2 years since you’ve last updated this story, I hope everything’s alright on your end.
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 13 . 5/30/2018
Just make a new story and call it whatever you want it to be called. We aren’t autistic lmao, as long as you post a notification at the end of the story we’ll know when to find it.
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 11 . 5/30/2018
The chapters have been getting much better as I read on, I’d recommend going back and re-writing the first few ones if you’ve got the time. The training scenes are a bit too long and boring to read IMO.
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 6 . 5/30/2018
Decent story so far, I’d just like to point out that 60 push-ups and 60 sit-ups isn’t a workout lmao.
pyrojack25 chapter 1 . 4/17/2018
Got a dead cat in there, Blade?
Guest chapter 14 . 2/21/2018
hey i am curious as to whats going to happened next in this story
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