okaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyy y...this was good, but i expected a bit more

It makes me happy knowing someone has also gotten attracted to Parental!RizaxEd! /sigh/ I feel like I've been in teh dark for so long...I never really understood what was so good of the parental stuff since none of them really interested me. (That and I do happen to like Roy/Ed. I would prefer no-one to bash my opinion...)

Okay, now to the story. I like how Riza felt the caring for Edward, but I think that Edward would have probably been more relcutlent to tell Riza his dream/nightmare. I think that the reason to get out the Colonel and Al was sufficent enough but I would have liked to see something...per say, reasonably different. (If that made much sense) Overall, the story was good, and you definately had some talent. Please note that these are merely suggestions and my own personal opinion.

La La Land

i like that hawkeye was kind of like a aunt or something

The two then exited the room and began their journal around the center.

Did you mean journey? Because that sentence doesn't make sense, but I do understand what you're saying.

awww! good job! i loved it! but i wish there was more!

...Did you get this idea from a review that I made on another one-shot? If you did i'm flattered but very adorable there is something about parental fics that make one feel so warm and fuzzy...like a chimpmunk in your chest...XD but anyways i enjoyed it!