Pretty good story.

(Jared’s last name is Cameron)

I am really enjoying this :)
But to everyone who comes across this: this is no such thing as a “barrier to your virginity”. It is BS! Losing your virginity it not “breaking through a seal” or needing to just “overcome the pain”. More often than not if it’s painful someone isn’t doing something right. That’s goes for your first time and subsequent times after. So let’s hope this comment isn’t taken down... but it would be weird if it was because the story is dirtier than this review ;)

Love the story. Sucks Jake had to be a man whore though

Thank you so much for one of the best ff stories I’ve ever read. Your Bella and Jacob are just wonderful.

Finally Bella has a backbone! Love it! Also your Leah is awesome!

Solo quería felicitarte excelente historia, una trama muy interesante y original. Muchas gracias por compartir tu talento con nosotros.

Great story really enjoyed it

I have never seen such a beautiful story and I thank you for writing it! I laughed, cried, hoped, and loved right along with the characters.

I love your jacob as alpha. I like bella and jake story too. Good job

Love jake the alpha and jake the lover. Such a lovely balance of both. Loving your story too

This is the best work I have read in a long time. It kept me completely captivated, Bravo!

Yhh you've gone too far with the oc. Not a fan of too much ocs. Not feeling it. Which is a shame, i was enjoying this story. Peace out.

Meh. Nit interested in Maddie at all

I don't even know where to start. This story was absolutely amazing. One of the best ones I have read. You have such a beautiful writing style and I loved all the detail you put into this story! I was very curious as to where the story was going to go from the beginning and you completely blew everything out of the water. There suspenseful parts of the story that left me on the edge of my seat anticipating what was going to happen next, but not too many that it was overwhelming and then you balanced it with showing of just their normal every day life.

I loved how you brought Jake and Bella back together and showed their imprint. I was definitely not expecting Embry to truly be Jake's brother but everything made sense in the end with how they truly were alike. I hated what happened with the whole Sam ordeal but I'm so glad everything worked out and they were able to be a family and trust again after he submitted to Jake.

Once again, this story was perfect and I am so happy that I was able to enjoy this piece so much. Thank you for sharing! I look forward to reading some of your other stories as well as ones you have recommended!