Reviews for A Push in the Right Direction
Mallegot chapter 10 . 11/6/2015
Omg, this story will probably not continue which is such a shame cause i love it!
oneuserz chapter 10 . 7/30/2014
I bet you've already abandoned this fiction... but anyway, I have to say, it's hilarious and addicting. I like the style, it's quick, but has enough details to describe the emotions felt.
If you ever continue it, I'd be glad for further chapters! :D
dragon-game chapter 10 . 1/8/2014
Good story.
I hope you continue it.
IcyWish chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
You've got to update soon :)
The characters are all in-character, so I praise you on that .. I look forward to chapter... 11
beth chapter 10 . 12/5/2012
FINISH IT :) so good!
sortofbored chapter 10 . 10/19/2012
Great story I would love to see it continued.
Beth chapter 10 . 9/18/2012
Please continue this is so good!
whatdotheydream chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
OH YES! It's SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO INTERESTING, you HAVE to update! SOON! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAASE?
whatdotheydream chapter 9 . 8/9/2012
Heehee! Jessie and James were proud of Ash, weren't they! It made them seem almost like parents...really awkward ones of course! Still, it was cute. And their plan? OMG, I CANNOT wait!
whatdotheydream chapter 4 . 8/9/2012
That was so cute and funny!
Guest chapter 10 . 1/22/2012
When ist the next chapter coming out
AALM awesome chapter 10 . 1/17/2012
Please continue. This is a cute story, I love how dense Ash is.
Hazel The Rabbit chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
This is awesome, Ash and Misty are so cute together, please keep going xx
Slivering chapter 10 . 1/4/2012
A HANDSHAKE? SERIOUSLY? Imma kill Ash one day!

Okay, the staring bit was actually SOOOO adorable, oh I just...SQUEE! 3 3 3 He is so adorable! :P

OK, I actually didn't see the Team Rocket thing coming! I was so focused on "Oh wow matchmakers are going to help out?" That I was actually pretty surprised it was team rocket.

I hope they don't mess everything up though :P

Anyways, great chapter as usual! I am looking forward to your next updates!

Hugz from pokemonstories-crazy!
Sardonicus chapter 10 . 1/1/2012
So, I've been away for awhile... I've caught up on this story and I'm impressed. I can see your progression as a writer. I like the addition of May and Dawn, they are both true to character, and Ash, Misty and Brock are all still well done. I really liked how Gary over-flirted with Misty, I thought that was pretty accurate. And I like how Team Rocket is getting involved.

So well done, on all the chapters, and keep them coming. Don't be too concerned with how long it takes you, though; good writing takes time, and us should understand that and be patient (though we do want to know what Team Rocket's plan is).
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