YESSSS! good now time for the second part XD and maybe even more! ((i hope))

This was just...so intimate and sweet and... honestly one of the most emotional ficlets I've ever read that portrayed the deeper sides of both Oz and Alice's hearts. Brava, brava, dear authoress, for capturing the essence of what real love is all about. *bows to your greatness*

Awwww! that was reall sweet! Oz is always really sweet but... only t Alice that because I like them to be together!

My gosh. I just loved this story. This is one of the few times where I felt so compelled to read a story over again and review. It felt so intimate, and I loved the ending sooooooo muuuuuch. I loved the fluff in it and how realistic it sounded, too. I'd wished there was more, but its ending was too epic. Dammit...I'm tearing up!

I sound weird...

Awwww, that was seriously sweet! Thanks for writing this one! It was well-written and an overload of fluff! XD

haha, truly sweet and mildly kinky. nice job ;)

Aww! that was really adorable! w I really like your writing style. o/o

Aww, it's so cute and fluffy x3

I read it two times! xD

This was just too adorable for words :) I honestly can't describe how much I love this fic or Oz & Alice! But you wrote this out so perfectly that you had me "aww"-ing at the end :]

Very cute and fun little piece. You set the scene well and made the atmosphere very intimate. Really enjoyed it. :)

I...am entirely too in love with this. I didn't know what to expect coming into this, reading the summary, but knowing you, I had quite a bit of hope.

And even then, you exceeded everything. You just blew me away. This was just...It's above and beyond. It's brilliantly written, the present-tense prose choice is perfect, and the interactions, characterizations, and dialogue are just so spot-on that there are no words. This is, definitely, one of my favorite pieces from you.

I love how adorable Alice is, how quietly bold Oz is, and how fantastically suited their relationship is. You really capture everything that makes Oz/Alice as much fun as it is. And as natural and canon as it is.

To be honest, this is probably one of the better fluff pieces I've read for this pairing that capture everything in so few words. 3

Awwww that was so kawaii .

encore encore!

More fluff or lemons would be appreciated :D

This was really sweet, especially towards the end. I don't know much about the characters but I can tell that you write them really well, Alice was so cute in this.

Keep up the great work!

PFFFF-AWWWW! How cute! And so prettily written.

This fic gives me major sweet and fluffy vibes. Well done Miss Lime.

I haven't read much for this series but I did like this. It's nice and short, which helps keep out anything unnecessary. The interactions between Oz and Alice were adorable and worked well. And it worked well if you wanted to write a continuation further developing the relationship.