Love love love all of it. I have just gone the entire fic in few hours. Is just awesome. So freaking good. It was true is epic!

Thanks a lot for write this piece of heaven years ago.

I have arrived here after read that the fic is epic, definitelly the first chapter is so good that i cant wait to read the others.

OH MY GOD WHY DID U DO THAT OH MY GOD JUST LET THEM BE HAPPY AND MARRIED GOsh I love this a lot

Amazing fic & job! I absolutely LOVED it! :)

I love it!

Wow, I love it! Heading over to the sequel now...!

Hey,
I'm reading this at your suggestion, and I love the narrative voice. It's sooooo Chuck! (later season spoiler, in case you're not already there, anyone who's reading, sorry!)
But this is evil, just evil, they're together but it's Dean's last day? Oooh, you are mean.
I suppose I'll have to keep reading to find out what Cas did wrong... ;)

I'll admit that I don't read a lot of fan fiction (I've been writing it since before fanfiction probably had a name though) but for some reason I just had this desire to search for some Dean and Jo fanfic last night. I'm really glad that I stumbled on your story. I enjoyed every word of it! Can't wait to read your follow up!

I was shocked to see my name mentioned in your thank you's. I could never repay you for the guidance you've shown me. I saw a friend in need and it was the least I can do. But I'll leave the rest for a private setting.

Oh and by the way...you're quite the evil temptress with that ending. I love it. Keep me on my toes. Is it early 2012 yet?

This chapter was so eye opening and revealed a bigger picture. To come all this way and receive answers was worth the wait.

"There are still monsters that will need to be fought. It won't always be easy. But life is what you make of it," he says, brilliant white light spreading behind him. "Cherish what you've been given and be the man we both know you are."

I loved this part :)

Ahhhh Bobby's house. The alternate Ellen-ized version with home cooked meals and warm painted walls. The homey feeling that makes me smile. You made me want to be at that dinner table too. Thank you for taking me there :)

Excellent ending, satisfying, message intact, strongly written and including one of my favourite characters, which is just a bonus ;)

About the only thing I would suggest, overall and bear in mind this is primarily about my preferences, not about your writing skill, is to review the work and add slightly more description to set the scenes a little more firmly in the reader's mind, where it doesn't interrupt the flow of the action?

Out of curiosity, how many drafts did this story go through? The beginning chapters feel less accomplished than the later ones, as the story began to take on its own life and the characters were snugged securely into themselves? Do you feel that? I may, as is my wont, be barking up the wrong tree here, but with nothing to add to the last ... five or six? chapters at all, it just feels that way to me.

As mentioned before, the story is compelling, and I can see why it's your favourite, mine too :) Well done and keep writing!

Chapter 15:

A very nice job of catching Dean up on all the changes from his time adventure. All believable, all natural.

The one very minor OOC thing I've noticed is the y'all variously from Sam, Dean and Jo. In my mind, none of them affect that drawl, only Bobby and Ellen. It knocked me out of the story for a second - nothing important but just thought I'd let you know.

Chapter Thirteen (and 12 by the way):

Again very strong, very clear, very focussed. No extraneous dialogue, the action moves forward logically and believably. Nice :)

Chapter Eleven:

This entire chapter is superb writing. The "hells" that are created by the soul trapped there are just perfect and have great imagination.

Is it annoying getting a review per chapter?