Reviews for Two Mistakes
FanBoy752 chapter 14 . 8/18/2013
perfect score 10/10
WordNerb93 chapter 15 . 11/18/2011
Okay, this seems a little unrelated, almost a sequel then an epilogue. Maybe in the next part, you could include something that really (that just sounds awkward for some reason) ties in with the rest of the story. I like the Lord of the Rings poetry, and that one is a particular favorite of mine. Great story, and I'm sorry if it seems like I spammed you with reviews. I just get obsessive with certain things at different times and, as it has been for the past few months, it is currently Phineas and Ferb stuff (mostly Phineas and Isabella moments).
WordNerb93 chapter 14 . 11/18/2011
Great ending! I completely sympathize with how Phineas feels! Okay, not completely. I know about the kissing is gross part (I held onto that view until last year, when I was 17!), but I don't know about how kissing actually feels. (Yes, I have never kissed anyone, not in that way, and, yes, by choice.) Well, the Epilogue will have to wait until after the P&F episode that just popped on! LATER!
WordNerb93 chapter 13 . 11/18/2011
I was too excited to review the last chapter, so this one is for both of them. The last chapter, given what had happened, actually did sound like what Phineas might do. I guess may previous view (in the chapter 11 review) was wrong.

For this chapter, I find it so funny, yet I think it went a bit too fast. Why wouldn't Phineas be wondering how Isabella went from appearing to hate him to kissing him? (Just ignore this question if you answered it in a later chapter...)
WordNerb93 chapter 11 . 11/18/2011
Ouch! I agree, banishing love is inhuman (and perhaps a good villainous plot for a story...), but I don't think Phineas would have given up so quickly. That's just my take, and it is far to late for these words to affect the story. But I still loved this chapter!
WordNerb93 chapter 10 . 11/18/2011
And there's the rub. Figure's that Doof would ruin something, even indirectly. I can't wait to read more! I don't think I'll be able to tear myself away (except to watch the Phineas and Ferb episode premiering in about 15 minutes!).
WordNerb93 chapter 9 . 11/18/2011
This is a classic Doof and Perry bit. I loved it! Now to find out how the beam will cause trouble for Phineas and Isabella...
WordNerb93 chapter 8 . 11/18/2011
I'll keep this one short and sweet, as I want to read on: Loved it!
WordNerb93 chapter 7 . 11/18/2011
I can't help it! I apparently have this need to review almost every chapter of this story!

This one just made me laugh! First, Doof and his invention: He doesn't know why he made it! That is so Doof and, thus, so funny.

Second, Phineas and Isabella: This is where I nearly fell out of my chair! It is just so funny to see them interacting without, well, really knowing what's going on! This is good stuff!
WordNerb93 chapter 6 . 11/18/2011
And, here I go again, reviewing before the end. It's not much, but I just had to say it, as I might not be able to catch up to the ending tonight. I like how for Phineas, everything is different, but is also the same. And Isabella feels the same about it. I like it, like they always had it, but never knew what it was. The story just gets better and better!
WordNerb93 chapter 4 . 11/18/2011
Okay, usually when I jump into a story, I review at the end, but I think I'm going to make an exception here, just in case. This chapter was great! How Phineas thought out his feelings for Isabella was just perfect! Was the Greek loves thing real? If so, nice research! If not, nice idea! I'll review more after I read more, but I just wanted to give my thoughts on this chapter.
xXJustSomeRandomKidXx chapter 15 . 8/28/2011
Awww. That's all I'm going to say, cuz I have to go eat dinner now, so bye! :]
SteadyEddieNewkumet chapter 15 . 8/27/2011
why did you put my where mine is supose to be.
xXJustSomeRandomKidXx chapter 14 . 8/17/2011
Heheh. Izzy. That cracks me up every time XD

Epilogue of their future? *puppy dog eyes*

:]
Dark Lord Thanatos chapter 14 . 8/17/2011
phineas finally understood wut his dad said, '' you gonna marry her ay ''
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