Aw this was very nice. I enjoyed this little story. I always liked Marak's and Seylin's interactions and is interesting to see them when he was just a kid. Good job with the story...

Good story! Your writing is very good, and that's coming from a grammar snob. I like the idea, and your use of the random words was interesting. It's nice to see how the relationship between Marak and Seylin got started. I used 'sunburn' in the same way, but I didn't think about how goblins would never get them, so props to you for remembering.

This fic is awesome! I love that someone finally tackled Marak Sixfinger and Seylin's relationship. You depicted it very well and used the words realistically.

Thanks for participating in the challenge :)

Great story! I'd never even considered Marak looking up human mental illnesses for his first wife, and it's a natural way to include the words for the challenge.

It's also nice seeing a fic that features original characters, especially one that is set pre-Kate. I could see this as actual canon.

Hope to see more HK fics by you in the future.