The only criticism I have is that I wish it was longer. :) It would be great if we had seen more of Luke's life on the streets, how he adapted, who he met, the obstacles he faced to get back to England...
Other than that, this is very well-written.

Why did I scroll through the PL Tragedy section? Why did I read this? T_T Starting from the first chapter, I was bawling my eyes out, especially with Brenda and Clark's farewells. But it was so... so touching at the end. I love the feels, how Luke had to adapt to survive on the streets, and the reunion. *Sob*
My only tiny nitpick- Flora could've been a little more relieved to see Luke alive after all those years (She could've given him hug at least!) But I like how she ended up engaged to Hammonds hehe. (Where have I heard that name before?)
Thanks for the wonderful story!

Awwwww! _

Another amazing story. I have spent my whole night reading your work! (I need to get out more...)
Yet another favourite :D
Geez, I am reading Layton fanfiction more than I am playing PL5... I really need to get that done...
Thanks again!
-Chai

I wish I could come up with something constructive or at least deep and through-provoking to say about this, but honestly the only think I can really say is...

D'. I CRIED. Not even kidding. That was amazing. It was Laytoneqsuely bittersweet and glorious and well-done. Nothing else really needs saying, in my opinion.

Beautifully-written story. Spent the entire last chapter hugging my Layton plushie and trying not to cry. :')

And again you've brought everyone to tears, but thankfully this time they are happy tears XD Thanks for taking the time to continue this story! It was a great joy to read

Nooooo! Cliffhanger! Again, thank you so much for continuing this~ I can't wait to see what happens! 3

Battle of the wits - one side of me is shrieking at Luke for letting go of all decency, the other just wants to give him a hug! Really good story! :)

Good two chapters

You seriously don't know how loud I squealed when I saw that there was a new chapter out! 8D

Poor Luke! Oh but I can't wait to find out if the person on the other end of the phone recognized his voice!

Thanks soooo much for updating! Hope you do so again soon~

It..it cant end this waaayy! (melodramatic)

its sooo sad 。・・(ノД)・・。

Nooooooo you can't just leave it like that! D8 I love how you have written it but it has such a sad ending D: oh well at least you let him live XD

Hmm, even though I don't like the thought of it ending like that, it makes a change. the fact that Brenda died like that is slightly cliché, but the story was very well written, and I encourage more like it. Well done :)