I like to think that at some point doof hit the yard with a just-the-right-size-inator that always makes whatever area your working always reach the right size. For reason for building maybe so DEI could cover the tri-state area and due to some obscure building law whoever owns that building owns everything in it.

I'm gonna say i greatly enjoyed that you're one of the few writers who still place some reality into fantasy specifically the trampoline safety(mainly because there are many thousands of trampoline related accidents a year in any one state even with a net if multiple people are on). Not many people realise that although this is a story it still influences you so reading about fun while still being quite safe under the conditions will still have a small but significant impact on the subconcious mind.

Isabella is written perfectly, but Phinse as seems a little cliche? Still cute all the same.

amazing story ti was increduble

A maze ing!

Heh, 1st person isn't too bad if you imagine yourself in the situation...the only problem is stopping once you're on a roll.

I would usually be pissed at the competition to Isabella but now I just wish I could bop her on the head. Seriously, it took him YEARS to figure out Isabella had a crush on him so its incredibly improbable that Phineas would fall for someone else with such obliviousness to romance...and flirting.

Omg this is the most romantic series I've ever read. please continue into the honeymoon and keep every single detail in. I want to find out if they have kids and you should put their honeymoon somewhere special and romantic.

I think it would make sense to remove this chapter now that the story is complete.

Amazingnesss! Really good and was cute :)

Amazing story...love the ending... Can you have them get slimed in the sequel?

Yipeeeeeeeeee! She's nice now! XD hahaha sorry about my other comment XD! I'm going hyper! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! XD

Olivia is the two Bs: bastard and a bitch! No offense. Anyway loving it so far!

I loved it! I love the finally got married!i think I like the first one you was please tell me how to do something like write a story about next one you do is they are have kids and there is a time machine in a there mom and dad died of old and Jeremy are go back to the first day they they do they see them they see the older cliffhanger is everyone in Danville sees older phineas and Isabella's kids walk over to younger phineas and say one thing."hi!" thanks for reading try to answer my maybe you can help me make something like ! :)

I loved it! I love the finally got married!i think I like the first one you was please tell me how to do something like write a story about next one you do is they are have kids and there is a time machine in a there mom and dad died of old and Jeremy are go back to the first day they they do they see them they see the older cliffhanger is everyone in Danville sees older phineas and Isabella's kids walk over to younger phineas and say one thing."hi!" thanks for reading try to answer my maybe you can help me make something like ! :)