I love this story so far I hope you update soon!

I love this so far, really sad but well done!

This is quite interesting. :3 Your writing style is definitely different; there's so much description in it. It has sort of a rhythm.
I definitely want to see how it turns out. ...If you decide to continue that is.
On that note I recommend that you continue :D

I like the story but i don't like your writing style. It's not something you can't change! :) Keep up your good work

Oh, I really like this so far! It was brilliant! :D

It's so different than most stories that you'll come upon these days. Sure I see a few Riku deaths, or perhaps even Kairi - but never, *ever* Sora. *sniff* Sora's so sweet - why did he have to die? I do like the concept though, and it looks like this story could take a very interesting route. Riku and Kairi have always been my favorite pairing, and sadly, their stories are so few and far between. This looks rather promising, however, and I do hope that you continue to update it, as I'd love to see how the two of them manage to make it through their terrible loss.

You conveyed emotion excellently within this chapter, bringing out Riku and Kairi's feelings with such vividness that it almost seemed as though the reader could "feel" what they're feeling. You did a brilliant job of bringing this scene to life with lovely descriptions of the day as well, to create a well-rounded, amazing chapter.

Also, I loved the story title! I think it seems to suit this story rather well, if I do say so myself :D

The grammar was also superb as well, except for a found one small flaw within your dialogue that I thought I should point out to you. Instead of writing:

"Sora", she whispered, blearily, like she was waking from a bad dream.

You should place the comma, period or question mark within the quotation marks, so instead it would read:

"Sora,"

But otherwise, your grammar was wonderful, and it's always nice to see so much care put into the grammar of a story such as you have :D

All-in-all, this was a wonderful read, and I greatly look forward to the next chapter!

I must say, wow! I found this and was almost overcome by manly tears. Good work.

I loved this! This story has tons of potential! It's sad that Sora's going to be dead in this story but it's a really interesting scenario. I think it's pretty likely that Riku and Kairi would actually get together (eventually not right away of course) if Sora died, so I don't think you'll ever be in any danger of OOCness which is always encouraging! Honestly, I don't understand why RiKai isn't a more popular pairing! I love your writing style - just thought I'd like to add. You have a great knack at describing things beautifully without giving too much away. Please write more!