They're all acting awfully calm after having watched their son/friend get electrocuted. In fact, Jack was the only one who seemed concerned in his own way in the beginning. Then he conveniently seemed to forget as well. All of this just seems too strange and OOC to me.

I do not know what Danny Fenton is, but it looks interesting.
P.S. my mentor says I have to speak in the way the noble Mr Larten Crepsley talked in. Oh help.

Very interesting way to turn ghost, being pushed in by Jack, it's almost comical. I actually had an idea for something like that a few days ago, I should get on that...

I like this story so far! It's really funny and pretty well written so far!

Aweshum!

cool!

Let me tell you a little something:
This is an EXTREMELY well-written story, especially for someone so young. I remember that I wasn't as good of an author as you at your age (and I'm still not). Also, though you say you may be rushing this a bit, it's okay. A lot of great authors do that every now and then. Furthermore, inspiration can be a hard thing to get when you're trying to get it, so take your time. Let the inspiration come to you, and then continue.
You are an incredibly talented author with a lot of potential and a great sense of humor, and I don't type a long speech about that to just anybody, so if you're not going to finish this, please continue writing other fanfics. I'll be willing to read them. (Wow. Do I really fail at writing inspirational reviews, too? You tell me.)

Ahhh... Either three, four or five.

okay that is one of the most stupid things i ever saw, but hell, it's funny...

Lol. Nice. But give us a real chapter soon, please! :D

Neat twist. Although, I really hated how Sam did not have the logo made at this time, and Danny didn't actually receive it until Memory Blank.

I'm now curious about how Danny's life is going to be, without having to hide from his parents. How will Jazz find out about her brother being half ghost? And Vlad, after all can't forget about the fruitloop.

Can you post again within the next month?

I've been wondering what those are too, if you find out could ya let me know?

Nice chapter, I bought the length was fine, but that's how long I write a chapter myself XD

C2's are communities.

Very nice chapter. It was funy! D i hope ur days get better. Have fun!