| Reviews for Pause |
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CupcakeGoodness101 chapter 1 . 10/15/2019 awww so sweet |
JC chapter 1 . 1/6/2013 Fan-out! They be so cute and fluffeh! |
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 11/25/2011 This was really sweet. I don't know why, but for some reason I really, really love Ruffnut and Fishlegs together. I guess that they're just such polar opposites that it works somehow. They compliment each other well. |
Bludwyn chapter 1 . 8/16/2011 Cool. I like. Thumbs up! |
keep-me-posted chapter 1 . 8/16/2011 Very cute. Very sweet. You don't see that in a lot of M-rated stories, but for those that CAN manage to actually make such stories sweet rather than..yeah, I applaud them. And I applaud you. I haven't been seeing a lot of Ruffnut/Fishlegs stories around lately. It makes me sad. But as long as your around to write some, that will be enough, for sure. :] I really liked this Oneshot. If you could see me right now, you would already know that from the huge smile I'm sporting at the moment. Keep up the great work! |
brwainer chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 Great one-shot. I like how your one-shots tie into one another and yet aren't connected enough to be a continuous story. (ex. "They would finish ... She would get mad" is a tie-in to the story where she says she doesn't want to get pregnant, at least not yet, correct?) |
Gumdrop Boo - Ch4rms chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 Oh giddyness! I saw this in my inbox and clicked it immediately though I didn't expect it to be a Ruffmance [i never look at ratings] But this line was grrreat! "They always pushed against each other as if any space would lead to failure" I like the enticing description without it getting into the porn-speak, not that I would expect porn-speak from you - I know you are classy. but it's a nice sentiment about Ruff's inner girly and feeling the most beautiful when Fishlegs is giving her all the attention and I agree Fishlegs has virility in the love department. I loved the description of the kising! It's so romantic and tantalizing! It's a good love-shot I think though at the end you meant to use 'assured' instead of 'assure' in that last line. |