Reviews for Pause
CupcakeGoodness101 chapter 1 . 10/15/2019
awww so sweet
JC chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Fan-out! They be so cute and fluffeh!
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
This was really sweet. I don't know why, but for some reason I really, really love Ruffnut and Fishlegs together. I guess that they're just such polar opposites that it works somehow. They compliment each other well.
Bludwyn chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Cool. I like. Thumbs up!
keep-me-posted chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Very cute. Very sweet. You don't see that in a lot of M-rated stories, but for those that CAN manage to actually make such stories sweet rather than..yeah, I applaud them. And I applaud you.

I haven't been seeing a lot of Ruffnut/Fishlegs stories around lately. It makes me sad. But as long as your around to write some, that will be enough, for sure. :]

I really liked this Oneshot. If you could see me right now, you would already know that from the huge smile I'm sporting at the moment. Keep up the great work!
brwainer chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Great one-shot. I like how your one-shots tie into one another and yet aren't connected enough to be a continuous story. (ex. "They would finish ... She would get mad" is a tie-in to the story where she says she doesn't want to get pregnant, at least not yet, correct?)
Gumdrop Boo - Ch4rms chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Oh giddyness! I saw this in my inbox and clicked it immediately though I didn't expect it to be a Ruffmance [i never look at ratings]

But this line was grrreat!

"They always pushed against each other as if any space would lead to failure"

I like the enticing description without it getting into the porn-speak, not that I would expect porn-speak from you - I know you are classy.

but it's a nice sentiment about Ruff's inner girly and feeling the most beautiful when Fishlegs is giving her all the attention and I agree Fishlegs has virility in the love department. I loved the description of the kising! It's so romantic and tantalizing!

It's a good love-shot

I think though at the end you meant to use 'assured' instead of 'assure' in that last line.