| Reviews for Antiphon |
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   That Shipping Has Sailed chapter 5 . 11/1/2013 this was very interesting enjoy reading gary and rachel fanfics |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/23/2013 Nice writing. This was fun to read. Thanks. |
| V5Precise-Red chapter 5 . 1/16/2013 I think you need to continue this :D I love what you have so far. The character's are true to how they are on the show and the storyline is great! |
| Your Worshipfulness chapter 5 . 8/27/2012 This is great-I love how in-character everyone is, especially Gary. Can't wait to read more! Your Worshipfulness |
| WildCitrusSunflower chapter 5 . 7/24/2012 Aw. I like how she just listened to the rain and heartbeats! So cute! |
| foxfire222 chapter 5 . 10/14/2011 this is such a cool story. are we gonna find out who that guy was who said he wanted Gary. please update soon cause i can't wait for more |
| Witch-Demoness chapter 5 . 10/6/2011 Rocked my socks! I love Gary and Rachel! |
| red-opti chapter 5 . 9/30/2011 I loved it& I want more. And little tip for Gary, he repeats hiself a lot sotry to do that more. |
| Silent Sage chapter 5 . 9/23/2011 I totally squealed when Gary had his arm(s) around her. Such cute imagery! And how clever! Nina blindfolded but still chipping in to give her two cents about Rachel and Gary. I like this plot, I'm totally psyched about your next update! |
| deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 5 . 9/23/2011 OMG!I loved are so cute and I adored the 't wait till the next chapter. UP-DATE!REAL!SOON! |
| helpmeimstuckon chapter 5 . 9/22/2011 Oh i just love this! :) it makes me so happy but kinda sad... and ocasinaly scared and i think im gona go read it again beacuse i cant sleep and its realy good... :) |
| Time and Fate chapter 5 . 9/22/2011 Ooo I'd sort of love to see this overarching plot develop |
| 68guns chapter 2 . 9/15/2011 Great story! Question and Answer was my favorite chapter. Rachel's concern for Gary is so sweet. I loved the line: "The trembling in his hand reminded her that she needed to be strong now. Somehow, the warmth of his hand reminded her that she could." Aww, I just love it! Here's hoping to see some more Alphas stories from you! |
| Silent Sage chapter 4 . 9/11/2011 That was a very thoughtful contrast between Agent Sullivan and Wilson. I was really starting to like Agent Wilson, so bummed about his death. Still, I'm glad it impacted Rachel in such an interesting manner that it created such a thought provoking moment for her and Gary. You really kept to their characterizations, especially their interactions with one another, especially the 'trustworthy' aspect. Thanks for another great chapter! |
| CatchingFallingStars chapter 4 . 9/11/2011 Yes! New chapter~ Sohappy! Very sweet, the little "I want you to feel safe with me." from Gary. I like the subject of trust of Agent Wilson and Sullivan. Love your characterization! : D |
