So amusing- the girly, curly hair! Merlin can be so manipulative.

WHAT. HOW CAN U END LIKE THAT!? It was a absolutely brilliant story! I loved it. But... but you can't just do that! You can't just leave this hanging with so much unanswered! But in the end, it's a great story. Good job

That was a pretty good story. I particularly liked the first half but I think you lost it a bit after Merlin "died". Still it was well written with and interesting plot and great character reactions. I wish there could have been more stuff from Leon, Percival, Elyan and Gwen's POV regarding Merlin and his many revelations. I also think that Leon seemed a bit too strict and intolerant of Merlin's "charm". I reckon that Lancelot should have lost his shit after Merlin died as well considering how close they were but he didn't seem to have much of a reaction. Gwaine and Arthur were brilliant and I quite liked Gaius.

Words cannot adequately describe how wonderful this story is. It's so well crafted

Awe inspiring story.

That's incredible. You're a genius!

It's a fascinating chapter. I love all the intrigue. I always suspected there was a lot of in-breeding amongst royalty.

Finally. Magic found courage.

Hilarious. That was excellent.

HAHAHAHAHAHA!

I'm a random person blazing through the internet and reading tons of longish Merlin fan fiction stories, and this is the first time I'm posting anything - not even sure if you're still reading reviews - I just had to say this haircut section had me ROARING with laughter! Supremely well written and hilarious!

This story was amazing :D Keep up the fantastic work :D

Awesome fic! Love the worldbuilding and all of it was just perfect.

speaking of relations, where has agravaine been through this? and hunith, i thought she was in camelot?
and, quite nice to return that original question of who/what is merlin? :D and the best answer in the world: arthur's cousin. :D
wonderfully done - i'm so glad i found this story!

wow. sad and sweet and magical. ;)
oh, for real. the magical creatures are alive!... but attacking. i like how merlin /could/ be short-tempered and condemning - but instead he appeals to them to give hope a chance. very nice.

oh, how awful. to lose freya again. or rather, not to be able to save her, again. :(
but, i love this confrontation with morgana. he able to love and forgive, and she so full of hate she can't even accept it... but, now what?...