I love it all none the less

Well, Lucius, damn him

Oooh please update! This is amazing!

Just powered my way through this. Really enjoying it, its really well written and I can't wait to see what direction you go in

Elenianz on tumblr has fanart featuring Severus, Lily & Petunia.

please update soon

Thank you so much for pointing out that the Marauder ARE bullies. Gosh, they are terrible.
I really like your fanfiction. It's very original!
And beware Marauders. Petunia will slap you across the face.

Interesting story! I’d love to see how this plays out

hey i just wanted to let you know that i really love your story and im interested to see where its going! good luck!

This a great story. I encourage you to finish it. I will definitely keep an eye on it!

Is this story on hiatus or discontinued?

Overall, this is a decent story. I love the premise because I've been looking for this kind of story for a while and the execution of the premise was decent as well. Your writing is smoother than many other fanfic writers, however your sentences often include unnecessary words that make them feel clunky to read and your comma placement is sometimes a little awkward. Furthermore, there are several scenes that feel very out of placemore suited to an anime than a Harry Potter story (the ice cream scene and the Frank sitting scene being the most prominent in my mind). Other than the occasional scene like that, the characters are very well written and in character. I must admit I'm more than a little irritated about chapter 30. I think it's great that you wrote a book and I have no problem with you promoting your book on , but I also think that uploading that promo as though it's a new chapter is disingenuous. You could have waited to announce it until you update for real or updated the previous chapter with a new note if you really wanted to get the word out there. Instead, you've made your eagerly awaiting fans, including myself, get their hopes up only to be disappointed by a fake chapter.

Side note: I don't know if you have a an author platform because I can't find anything about you when I Google your name, even with the title of your book. The following comment only applies if you don't have an author platform: As an author, it's extremely important to be active on social media as well as have your own website so that you can properly get the word out about your book. I recommend watching the YouTube channel "Writing With Jenna Morecishe has a lot of advice on author platforms and more.

Cool...

I love it when my favorite fanfic writers publish their own work because I already know they’re good writers and it’s nice to see them creating their own universes and characters. I’ll definitely check it out.

Congratulations on the published book! hoping that you take a well deserved rest and get back to making this other wonderful story of yours!

Sincerely a fan.