Gwaine hasn't actually told Merlin that he loves him, has he?

The style is fun to read, except it actually reminds me of Gwen's pattern of thought, rather than Gwaine's.

This was so fantastic! I really enjoyed it (and I procrastinated doing my school work for way too long to finish it). Both curses! and yay! for their being a sequel for me to read...because I definitely want to do that more than my homework right now _

bro you got my heart sad. smh, this story is so well written and the plot is so good, it has me on the edge of my seat.

Wonderfully written! Marvelous.

I am so glad Gwaine said yes, and they stopped dancing around each other. This is a real relationship, complex and messy, with two very imperfect people. So often in life we let our fear of heartbreak or rejection cause us to miss out on joy. Love is worth the pain, but we have to be brave enough to reach for it. Bravo Gwaine and Merlin!

Merlin is too naughty- his eyes on Arthur while he feels up Gwaine. Also so insensitive to Gwaine’s feelings.

One of the most romantic lines I’ve ever read: ...”even if he travels to the end of the earth and beyond, he will never find anyone he loves as much, anyone he could love at all.” Gorgeous writing.

Gwaine is wonderfully romantic! Well done.

Fascinating story!

Really liked this story, an interesting idea and I like how it ended

Very cool. I really like your writing style.

I don't normally review the first chapter of a completed fic (or first post-prologue chapter), but I just had to this time so I coukd talk about things before I forgot them by the time I'd finished.

Your writing style is amazing. The little jokes interspersed with the introspection work really well. Plus, I loved the scene while hebwas still falling in and out of consciousness, it was a great way to introduce his feelings. Can't wait to see how this fic progresses.

Oh , My, God! this is amazing! Well done!Everything! and all of it! can't wait till i see what you have in store in the sequel!
points that i want to say:
Poor poor Gwaine, even after everything , from what i see, Merlin is Still no less in love with Arthur than he was- since there was no mentioning of him falling out of love-, thinking Gwaine was going through this whole relationship -or began it, Gwaine did sort of confess- because he was trying to "Forget" his loved one too... It's kinda sad... being 2nd best/choice... Poor Merlin

And Lancy- oblivious to an instinct Lancy- doesn't know the real magnitude of Gwaine's pain because he thinks Merlin is just as in love with Gwaine as the man is with him

Poor Poor Gwaine, alone in his pain and uncertainty...with no one to share it with... Must be tough

Oh. This was a wonderful read - great plot, skillful writing, and brimming with angst, romance, and hilarity. You are an excellent writer. Thank you for sharing your talents!