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Haha! This was really, really cute! "Pretty". Hm, I usually use that word to describe hot jerks. LOL!

Keep writing! :)

Ha ha this is funny. Pretty, lol

haha ~ that was cute! i especially loved Lanna in this - i can totally see her doing that :)

Oh gosh...I bet I seem like a stalker, reading and reviewing all of your stories. hahahahah. :P You just happen to write really cute one-shots, and the summaries are always those you-know-you-want-to-read-me sort of summaries. :)

But thanks for the little shoutout! :)

And this was super great. I've had the same talk with one of my friends before. I call guys pretty, even if they're something slightly..."different," cause I'm too embarrassed to say what they actually are. ;P

So anyway. The story was really great, and I really enjoyed Lanna's role. Chelsea was funny, as well, but Lanna's character really stood out, and it was great.

Nice job! :)

Well this was really funny, and cute...or do I mean pretty? ;)

~Lovely oneshot! I really enjoyed it!

Where do you come up with this stuff?

I've read all your other little oneshots that you've been throwing out, and I've gotta say, they are all soooooo funny! Keep up the good work!

~Horsey

To be honest, I think this story needs some work.

For one thing, the way you put Chelsea's quotes, as well as her thoughts in the same line is jarring. Yes, you put it in italics, so it's easy to tell it apart. Yet, it doesn't look clean to do it that way.

As for pretty being feminine... I think Lanna would be one of the last to say that. And even then, there is a term people have used, known as 'pretty boy.' So I don't think it works that well.

I didn't find the story too interesting either. All it seemed to be was basically being on how 'you can't call a guy pretty.'

Vaughn seemed unneeded in the story. He didn't really belong there. This could have been just a conversation with Chelsea and Lanna.

However, I do think Vaughn would be a bit offended at being called pretty. I'm not sure why I feel that way, but I do. If Vaughn was in earshot, I'm sure he wouldn't have been pleased.

Spelling looked fine, and I didn't notice anything grammar wise. But, the story itself doesn't seem all that good to me. Sorry if that sounds harsh to you.