Love the song choice. Huge fan of 10 Years. I actually live in the same city as the band and have met Jesse on more than one occasion. Wish I could post a picture for proof.
Anywho...I was always stuck on Edward/Bella fics, but one day something told me to try something out of my comfort zone, and that lead me to a Bella/Paul story. I'm absolutely addicted now.
I've made it passed chapter two and that's a good thing. As I read, I can sense Bella as the teenager she is. She has a little immaturity left in her and I love that Charlie already knows all about the supernatural world, and his decision to put her in a Rez school for more protection. I'm ready for her and Paul to finally click human to human.

love it

I like your Bella so far. You didn't give her a complete personality transplant but you definitely removed all the annoying out of her and kept the awesomesigh* yes even i will admit she has some awesome). Or... maybe it's you just removed Edward? (who has NO awesome). Hahaha I am so funny
Not really but I occasionally do make myself chuckle.
Your story has made me lol though

23. 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I really enjoyed this. I have to admit I was worried about these two for a while, afraid that they wouldn't get together and then add in the Leah issue and I was ready to flounce. So glad I stuck with it and they got their HEA. Great job, loved it.

I love all the song choices. It’s like I’m back in time and 16 again. This story is epic!

It is not to offend but that load of shit. Pablo's attitude is stupid, or he wants it or not, but since he goes to hell

Awwww this was such a great story!

I loved this so much, thank you for sharing

For the holidays, I'm going through all my favorite fics and making sure to comment on them to show my appreciation!
I love your Paul/Bella fic! I usually go for Jasper/Bella but I am totally okay with this pairing too! You just make it work! And I love how hard Paul fought to be a good enough person for Bella when really he didn't need to. So sweet yet angsty. Btw, have you considered moving your fics over to AO3? They allow multiple comments!
Keep up the great work and happy holidays!

This was sooooo good!

What a fabulous story, thanks so much for sharing it.

Just wanted to let you know I loved this story! I posted a review to it on Tumblr under "the-ice-goddess". I'll have tagged you if you have a known account!

qwerty Hi

All throughout this chapter all I could think of was how perfectly it fit with Brantley Gilbert Hell on an Angel. Btw I love your writing style it's unique :)