Reviews for Brink of Innocence
Weallfadeaway chapter 8 . 6/30/2019
Man, I know it's been awhile but I really wish you'd finish this. So cute. So hot. I just wanna watch teenage them all day every day... as wrong as that is.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/5/2018
I love this fic. I’m late. But I’m real interested to see what Josh has to say to Jay. Also how jay takes the news from Adam.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/5/2018
I know I’m late, I just found this but it’s fantastic, please update it:)
LilKitty chapter 8 . 4/19/2017
My fave wrestling slash couple! Really nicely written by the way. But tell him what...Tell him what?
Mrs. Roman Amore Lesnar chapter 3 . 11/18/2016
wow this gave me the chills
takers dark lover chapter 8 . 3/20/2016
Adam does need to tell Jay but I'm glad he didn't do it now. Now was just for them like it should be.
LadyDragonsblood chapter 8 . 3/17/2016
So fantastic to see a new chapter from you! and WHAT A CHAPTER!

I LOVED IT! I love how sure Jay was that Adam "would see the light"... but it's easy to say it doesn't matter when you don't know what it is. I really hope Adam does tell Jay, and that Jay takes it okay... I mean... Adam had to know, and that was the only way for him to find out...that he belongs with Jay... and I hope Jay sees it that way.

I wish I could write smut as well as you ... so fantastic... you are such an inspiration to me ...

I hope you never quit... and dare I say... update soon?
ilzehs chapter 7 . 11/24/2015
Oh God...I should learn by now to not get so worked up over a piece of fiction but you get me soooo invested with your overly awesome brilliantly talented writing to this day! I consider myself lucky as shit that you have re-started working on your writing with some E&C. It makes me stupidly giggle. This chapter was simply so good in so many ways.

Your work of art with emotions and how you you handle them is amazing. Your characters feel so real. Their mistakes, their feelings, their actions...gawd...my heart feels for these boys. In their ripe age, them discovering the heart hardships...its just a very good story and I am so happy to see it continued.

Poor Adam. I wanted to hug and slap him all the same time for being so stubborn and stupid but then he called Jay and I couldnt be mad at him anymore. Honestly I wasnt expecting him to come around so soon, but this experience was very much needed. It made him realize his actual struggle. He cannot deny Jay's love. Its not about being gay or not. Its about Jay. Jay's love is probably beyond sexual orientation when it comes to my mind, lol. Adam need Jay. But his needs are beyond what a friend can give him. Jay is his soulmate. The sooner he accepted, the better.

I love Jay in this fic. He's clear from the get go. He's miserable but he didnt push Adam. He wanted Adam to come around on his own. He's so sweet and brilliant. Stable. Adam need someone stable. strong. Intelligent. Jay held his own feelings back and gave it time and succeeded. I am so happy for him. But if now Adam gets out of line, I would prefer him to beat some sense into him...with that I mean show him that only his dick can satisfy all of Adam's sexual needs and fantasies :P

You have written Judy so beautifully. I love how you incorporate their real personas and life stories and it makes it so much more connectable. Judy is such a smart kind hearted loving mother. Adam is lucky to have her. She was honest. And that's the best thing about it. She has given Adam the courage in all honesty. Now we can leave everything else on Jay. He'll make it all right for Adam.

The phone call and Jay's reactions were so beautiful. He was so desperate but yet kept his cool. He knew deep inside in his heart he would get Adam. That's true love. He believed.

Oh man...waiting for up coming chapter is fucking hard. Because its gonna be amazing. We're getting more right? You cant leave us all hanging! We need E&C lovin'!

Adam and Jay are so sweet and beautiful and I love you so much for entertaining us with this beautiful ship. Thank you mama for working on it. Hope to see more soon!
takers dark lover chapter 7 . 11/9/2015
Oh boy I hope Jay's brother isn't going to be a problem. Very glad Adam told him.
LadyDragonsblood chapter 7 . 11/7/2015
So, so good to see you writing... and so glad to see another chapter of this story.

I could feel every bit of Adam's torn soul... and oh, his relationship with his ma made me miss my mom so so much.

It was very much like that for me... my coming out to her scared her... but yet, she loved and supported me through everything. My dad as well, but this is about mother and son.

i can well imagine this is how Judy would be... and you got the conditions of their living situation down so perfectly.

I am thrilled Adam called Jay... but now, I hope Jay can handle what Adam has to tell him... yeah, Adam did lose one kind of virginity... but... not the one Jason can claim... I hope they don't break up before they get together... Josh is cool... and I hope he supports his brother as well...

Please don't leave us hanging too long!

Dare I say it... Update soon please!
EdgeHeadUK chapter 7 . 11/6/2015
So...

Where do I start? How can I tell you how freakin' UH-MAY-ZING you are without being all stalkery weirdo on you. Hmm. Well, I can't think of how, so tough, stalkery weird minion is what you're getting.

This chapter, is beautiful. So very beautiful. Adam is breaking his heart thinking over & over what he did, & the regrets he has must feel so huge to him right now. I'm happy, that he finally owned up to his own feelings, & worked out that sometimes, the heart wants what the heart wants, & woe betide what the brain thinks. And in Adams case, the heart wants hims Jay-Jay.

You've written Judy so perfectly, you can almost hear her thought processes as she turns everything over in her mind, & I love how you gave her such a compassionate & accepting nature here. Her reasons for being scared for her son are reasons I'm sure a lot of parents have for their children when they decide anything in their lives, not just coming out. I'd like to think that should my child make that announcement to me that I would be as open & honest as Judy.

That phone call... well well well... I love how they told each other they loved each other, without actually saying it. It's so teenage & pretty & adorkable. I'm scared, because knowing Jay, he's going to be so very hurt that Adam didn't come to him before the 'April incident' (as I will henceforward refer to it), but hopefully he will understand, given enough time & kisses, that Adam HAD to go through the fire to come out the other side the man Jay wants him to be.

This is an awesome update. Thank you for sharing your brilliance.

P's, 'girl slime'. Genius.
Sparkles Blue chapter 7 . 11/6/2015
You're back! Yayyyy!

Adam moping and so heartbroken over Jay is so teenage like and endearing and Jay's excitement at hearing Adam and not being able to wait until he saw him to hear the words.

But now their family is catching on. At least Adam's mom is supportive and Jay's brother had the presence of mind not to out him but does he accept it though? We'll see.
ilzehs chapter 6 . 8/28/2015
OMG I cannot believe I missed this! I almost lost hope! Okay, I'll admit, I'm shedding a tear or two. Yes, this is how much I miss your writing. And you come back with some E&C? God, I love you mama! I miss reading so much but I have almost nothing to read nowadays. Doesnt mean my love has died, I just got to have the right people reminding me why I used to have so much fun with this stuff ;) You my darling is and always will be the best one here who still entertain me with things I love and hold onto!

So, now onto the chapter. So long ago I read it, but I still remember fondly how much this story was close to my heart. It is one of the most realist E&C fic ever for any E&C fanatic slasher who want to read their relationship that is connectable. That is believable and brilliant portrayal. You are such a good writer who is showcasing her brilliant story telling skills in this. All the struggles emotions feel so real and related to their age. Seriously, so impressed with story telling here.

First half was so good. I feel so bad for Jay. Many can relate to that. True love is rare, and its never easy to let go. I imagine myself in Jay's place and I feel actual pain in my heart because wanting something that you can have but are not having because someone is afraid...its terrible. Adam is worth trying...worth trying forever. He belongs to Jay and if he refuses to see it, I say Jay force him to see it. Btw, I thoroughly enjoyed Jay's talk with his brother. He seemed so cool. Not pushy. Just a cool sibling. Oh, and thoughts of what Jay wanted to do to Adam with his dick...that just distracted me from all the emotions so excuse my horniness when it comes to E&C :P

I cant be mad at Cindy for her reasons...But damn you girl how can you resist a face like Adam? Well, I mean good for me...thank you...He is only to be touched by Jay...But still its ADAM!

I want to honestly punch some sense into Adam. He's acting totally natural but E&C shipper in me want him to go and fall into Jay's arms so he can make everything better and take care of Adam like only he can. But...when you are reading a good story, you gotta keep your pace up with the sensible part of story. So, I am totally in for Adam getting freaked out by pussy once he gets on with this girl.

God Adam...I wish you could see the light only Jay can bring to you. You will...Rhi will make it happen. Right Rhi? You won't be leaving this for another hiatus please...

So much love for you and your writing. This story. Just, plain love.
takers dark lover chapter 6 . 7/23/2015
WOW an update thank god.
Adam is so confused Jay needs to give him time.
LadyDragonsblood chapter 6 . 7/22/2015
Poor Jay... and Adam... I just wanna smack him up side of the head and tell him GET TO JAY!

I kinda can't blame Cindy... but I sure felt Adam's frustration.

I hope his time with April makes Adam finally realize it's Jay he wants and NEEDS.

Hang in there Jay sweetie... Adam will be well worth the wait... IF he ever gets his head together!

GREAT to finally see another chapter... I will NEVER give up on you or any of your stories

LOVED IT... and dare I say it...

Wait for it...

Wait for it...

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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