Wow! What a gem! I absolutely love your story. So in character. I've always wondered how the relationship between Dexter and the kids would develop, and I can totally see this happening.

Thanks for posting and sharing!

keep writing this!

I like this!

Characterization is just so off...

I'm just gonna say you really don't know how to describe the character of Dexter at all. And Astor acts like a brat.

I like it. The drinking with Dave at the party is a little too exaggerated. But I like the story a lot and particulary chapter 5 is excellent. Thanks!

noice.

I LOVE HARRISON! He's such a smart-a... Spunky one, but I can definitely see Dexter training him to be a braniac.

Dear Lord, I squealed when Deb was mentioned! She didn't deserve anything that happened in the later seasons. I sobbed harder for her than I ever have for a character.

Holy sh... You've perfectly captured Astor and how she never /truly/ grew up, mostly due to Rita's death. She's definitely reacting like how you would expect to Dexter's emotionless state, his box, Harrison, etc.
Looking forward to reading the rest of this!

Ooh this is actually SUPER interesting. Gotta be honest I was kinda iffy on the summary, but color me intrigued :3

Holy moly! Nice to see that this is still going. Good update, thanks.

Is a hiatus or is abandoned?

Please continue, the upcoming had a lot of questions

look into this

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SO GLAD TO SEE THIS STORY MAKE A COMEBACK! And it did not disappoint. how fucking hot was it when Astor was doing Dave and thinking about Dexter. I can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder if Dex is going to be jealous when he sees dave stayed overnight. (ME HOPES SO MAWAHAAAAA)