Reviews for Beach Day
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 8/21/2017
J'aime.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
I love this story, I just re read it for about to 12th time
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
love it :)
Roxas fleur chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
ahh it's not finished yet!
Roxas fleur chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
ahh it's not finished yet!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
Good story. So want the girls (and guys) to hit on him so Luis gets mad
MellowYellow123 chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
I loved this story, wished you added a second parter... And it would have been hilarious if Jason jumped into Clarks arms as they were in the water and it would have been completely obvious who his father was.. Hope you put in a second part to this story.
000Anonymous000 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
God, you can hit me. This is the tenth time I'm reading this story and only now I realize I haven't given it a review. This was absolutely amazing. And so funny. I can just imagine poor Clark squirming in front of Lois. Poor thing. At least Lois figured it out though. It would be amazing if you made a sequel. I'd appreciate it a lot.
SkyOrihara chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Awesome
Lavender Angel-96 chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
UUUUPPPPDDDDDAAAAAATTTTEEEEEEEEEEE! This is a great fanfic. And it gives Superman Returns lovers the chance to get the happy ending the movie didn't give and Martha gets to meet her grandchild Jason. U should do more chapters to it because it would be SupermanTastic. HOPEFULLY U WILL UPDATE!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Wow... That's a weird way to find out, I like it though, I think you should write more
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Excuse me! How can you not do another chapter of this? I want to see what happens next. If you don't I will hurt you! No not really. Is that enough motivation for you to finish the story? Lol. But seriously, write another chapter. Please? Ur writing is awesome !
madcloisfan chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Loved it. Now get back here & finish this
linbug chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
please, please, please pretty please!
turn this onto a two shot. very well done and entertaining. and their realy arn't that many superman clois stories. it is your duty as a briliant writer to grace us with more of your work.
please, please, please pretty please! ;)
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