That was very, very sweet. Playing and dancing around in the rain after a war must be... Refreshing, to say the least.

Lovelly.

I just have one question: What happened to all the capital letters? .'

Very sweet story. I like the title too. That's one of my favorite songs from The Sound of Music. The only problem was that nothing was capitalized. Overall, good job!

Again, really really sweet and I love your choice of vocabulary :D. Just one thing- where are the capital letters? :L Overall, love it.