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the story was nice, different from orignal series.i hope you pair percy and gwen and not annebeth for this is the pairing that every one regularly put up...

Wow! This was great easily one of the best if not the best Son of Neptune story on this site! :D I have to say I'm really impressed and it sad to see that they're aren't as many favourites as this story deserves :( Anyway just wanted to congratulate you on a great piece! Thanks :D

I love the way you use real roman military terms I haven't even finished the chapter!

wow. gee. this fanfic is epic.

Read it all very nice job and the sequal as well. The writing, creativity, style, grammar and pace are all very appealing. Faved excellent work and wish the story more exposure because it is well deserved.

I thought Percy getting hurt was impossible

oh this is interesting. Percy learning to be a leader and not just a warrior

I have read it 3 times and is still good

Hip Hip Hooray

*like* : )

Long time no see! Take your time, no big rush its all about quality not quantity (or timelyness).. At least that's what I tell myself when it comes to my budding story (so far just a whole lot of brainstorming/backstory). Anyways good luck and I look forward to my "new story" alert.

PercyJ

PS- on pov's I think that it would be good to have Percy Gwen and annabeth because that makes an interesting triangle right there. (Tell story through their eyes & include their thought about each other)

Good writing and hopefully percy dosen't die when annabeth finds him(seriously she seems the type to kill if he is cheating) But I'm looking forward to the sequel

As you well know, I'm pumped for this update! : D looking forward to it!

Romans dont do a phalanx they create a shield wall with large oblong shields and gladius which is nothing like a phalanx which is greek