i enjoy your story

No, I should be the one to say thanks to you for your effort making new chapters

Hope to read more soon!

Alright, this is a lot better than the prologue.

I can see where you're trying to go with this, and I'm pleased with it. A few grammar mistakes, but not as many as your first chapter. Your English is improving. My only issue is that I feel like this chapter was too abrupt. It feels forced. Maybe work on that.

But beyond that, this was good and I look forward to reading what else you've got.

OK so first off:

This seems pretty well written so far. There are a few grammatical errors and you really like to use commas but I think I can overlook that because I'm a little interested in how this is going to play out. I can see there's potential for this story. I just hope this doesn't turn out to be one of those stories where Sakura is a total Mary Sue and becomes too insanely powerful, because there's far too many of those out there.

I'd hate to see a well-loved and otherwise well-received story ruined all because of an overzealous writer.

This chapter was very short and left a lot to be desired, though not in a good way, I hate to say. It sort of feels like you're trying to begin with a mystery or suspense tone, but haven't quite reached it. I feel like you should add a little more detail to the beginning. Show us that she's dazed, because you're doing an awful lot of telling.

I'm going to continue reading, though. You have an interesting concept, almost completely positive reviews, and you said you were updating the story to adjust with your developing English and writing skills. So I'm genuinely excited to see how this all turns out.

I really enjoy this story. !

You haven’t updated for 2years o•m•g whhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyy are you doin us like that please update soon

No one more chapter left your killin us

Dang did naruto try to revenge her or anything man to be forgotten is the worst

On the low I don’t know who the hell shes gonna end up with cuz there is so much pairings but I kinda want her to crush after Itachi or miss Sasuke

I hope Sakura beats Konan ass bro!

Don’t forget your a medic but forget your a fighter?! She wasn’t even thinking about Naruto or Kakashi!

It’s onky getting better! I like her storyline and how she still has her spunk by saying “do it” I was like there’s my girl! Haha new village new house... I’m bout to find out

He’s goin in on her lol “All those you loved moved on with their lives” lol like he’s really mad mad LOL

Super excited to read on! You have an excellent start with such detail mani felt like was dying too haha