Nice, should've had celestia show Luna the basics, got her all even hornier and then she would've left

the last part almost made me fall out of my chair!

HaHA! I nearly died when Big mac said that! XD lol

Wow. I'm laughing right now, but I think it'd be immature to just put, "lol", and going off with a bunch of praising words might be unnecessary. So yeah, I think this is awesome. I know this review doesn't seem like it, but trust me, I'm giggling like an idiot.
Love the story, well done! I like how seriously Luna took Celestia's sarcastic advice, and how Big Mac is the poor guy who suffered because of it.

You should write more of this

pfff hahhahahhaa

Poor Mac.

ffffffffffbaahahahahaha!

PRICELESS!

Nice to see someone understands that it doesn't always have to be about sex. Funny, loved it.

ok, first of all im typing this from my 3ds browser, and i lost the stylus, but nvrmind that.

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very well written with a humorous tone, untill the very last line, when i burst out laughing and it became the funiest thing i read all nite. good job. im a semi bronie, so im still not fully ponysmart yet, but i still knew the characters and found it rofl funny.

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moral of the story: be careful how you use sarcasm

That was nice.

You got a chuckle out of me.

This story is simple, short, and sweet. It hits like the fist of Bruce Lee...and the punchline is hilarious. Thank you for a good laugh. I look forward to more.

Now that image will be with me for a while... anyway I really liked it especially the crossword since I love those frustrating things. Thanks for a nice chapter hope you continue this story :)