please come back! during these trying times we need a break from the reality we lige in and need new chapters. tour works give us a way to escape with the mind without going anywhere.

when you finally come back you might want to try some grammar me it's free and it helps. it's not always correct but it's pretty close.

please come back and update this story!

I just found the story today you should continue it!

OMG I love this story and I really enjoy how it flows I hope you haven't giving up on it and I really hope you update again.

The story is good, i hope to see next chapter. I am waiting for it. :D

I'm sure this is abandoned by now but I just wanted to say that this story is beautiful and I hope one day you continue it

I truly hope this hasn't been abandoned. Please write more I need to know what happens. Also please update this on AO3

I'm going to have to disagree on one of them people that I gave you a review a human James Kirk is not always good I mean I like to see him as a alien are a half-breed life Spock is it is a new meaning of James Kirk it means I can be something else other than humans so it's good so keep up the good work

This is one of the best stories I read I read it like 22 times that's what will you do another one but this time make him betazoid how to take a doo on where his mom and dad both live and that his dad is human

I understand real life can grab you by the throat, shake you all around, then leave you stunned and locked in a tiny corner of your mind. But please write something! I am becoming worried. If you are blocked, try talking with another writer or perhaps the two of you could break the block, by using this story line to write the most outrageous, wacky, never to be published, piece of star crap ever to be written. Hey, sometimes it works! (But then again, sometimes strange people in white IT uniforms come and forcefully remove your computer.) Either way don't stop dreaming or writing. Ta Ta.

Please update this fanfiction soon because it is a great story and I would like to know how it will end.

com on pls continue

I first read this story a few years ago. Now I rediscovered it and I was both surprised and happy new chapters had been posted. I think this story very promising, complex and full of many plots. I hope you'll continue it; it seems the most important parts are just about to begin.

Holy crap this was the best story ever and I'm so mad that you haven't continued it! The epicness of this is off the scale!