Nillie: if you read this, the book is also available in paperback.

I am sad to see that you've taken down all but the first chapter, because I enjoyed this story very much the first time I read it, and would really like to read it again. Alas, I do not own a kindle, so I cannot continue my reading in that fashion either.

Enjoyable story. I liked the way you fleshed out some of the characters and matured them. The male characters were diverse and admirable. At times the story seemed to become a little bogged down by the details, but overall very nicely done.

Beautifully written, highly amusing, and wonderfully witty!
This is one of the best continuations of Pride and Prejudice that I have ever read.

I loved seeing two more romances settle themselves; and in paticular I enjoyed seeing a nod to my favorite musical Phantom of the Opera! Sighs... I've always adored the Phantom! Many thanks for another story that contains new and marvellous connections between well loved books! :)

A relly, really nice, goo, very interesting, unexpected, exciting and original story. I cant wait to read more. It was one of the best stories I ever read. I couldnt stop reading it. I wanted to go to bed at 1 oclock, and now it is five. I will try to read more stories of you later today.

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I have thoroughly enjoyed this and hope for more. I'm sorry I didn't review much but the story was just pulling me along!

P.S. Jane had a girl named Elizabeth, right? :)

P.P.S. Did their methods of birth control actually work?

Ffoulkes, eh? He has an illustrious relative! :) And I really must meet these Carlyons. I'm curious about the others now.

Aww, of course Ned likes papa's real horsie better! I wish he would repeat a swear-word in front of this Marjorie creature though. I'd like to see HER have the vapors. I don't know how Fitzwilliam kept himself from replying "her head has been broken for as long as I can remember!"

Anne's right. Were I in her position I would choose exactly as she has done.

ok, NOW I'll slap her. ;)

I've never met the Carlyons. Now I have to look them up!

Burying your child has to be the most horrible thing, so I don't want to slap her just now. For once. All I can think of is how lucky those babies are to be free of both their idiot parents! They actually have a chance at a decent life.

Is anyone sorry he's dead? Now we get to watch Lydia rampage about trying to replace him - in your hands I'm sure this will be awesome! :D

Anne de Bourgh, the next Jane Austen! :)

Spot-on perfect. :) Poor Papa - little Ned was only sharing his toy with his best friend! Pleasant shocks from BOTH Kitty and Mary here. Love the fashion details.