WOW This is the most outstanding Fanfiction I’ve ever read, words can’t describe how amazing your story is you are indeed a gifted author. This story was well structured and made sense. So thank you for writing Maybe George RR Martin could take some lessons from you.

Awesome story, thank you for sharing it.

When the love interest calls the other "child" in the description, you just know it's going to be some icky shit.

Not a fan of Dany/Jorah pairings but this was a good read.

Lovely, it was one of the best storyes out there with Jorah and Dany, I enjoyed it very much. The characters were done nicely, it felt like I was reading from the books. Great!

I very much enjoyed this story, it was nicely written and had that tint of a personal touch, but without straying from the series' universe. It was a great find, this fic, which pretty much read like it contained the real chapters in the books, however, the one thing I object to is the end. I found it a little rushed, like it lacked a certain something, maybe a surer closure to the looping romance you set for us, readers. But maybe this open ending makes this story so pertinent in the 'A Song of Fire and Ice', as all the chapters always end with lots of questions and definitelly opened. Maybe this feeling comes from the craving of a real romance in the series, as most of them end tragically (thank you very much, GRR Martin, no love for the wicked players of thrones:)) ). This being said, I loved your story and I will check more of what you have written. Lots of respect for your work!

Wonderful story. Thank you for writing it.

I've sat here all night reading this whole story. Thank you, thank you so much.

But if she never did do that stupid thing she would have had never got her dragons

I just wanted to say how much I've appreciated this AU. It's really well done, sweet and so realistic that I could really see the characters behave like this. My sincerest compliments.

I simply have no words but...bravo!

I'm completely in love with this story. You portrayed them so well, it seemed like I was reading from the book itself. Thank you so much for sharing. I needed a Dany/Jorah fic like this one.

The Targaryen madness woven into this chapter was really interesting. While Dany's hatching of the dragons in canon was genius, it was also completely insane. It was nice to see that addressed in a different way here. And of course I adored that Dany chose to bear (no pun intended) the sigil of House Mormont. Again, it's all the little things that show how far they've come and how close they're getting.

The line, "Had Jorah truly been so distracted by a breast...?" is one of the funniest things I've ever read. It tempered the feeling of unease at Xaro's appearance perfectly. Jorah's declaration of love was beautiful, but still bittersweet. Dany still needs time to open herself up to the idea of Jorah as a lover. I really liked the parallels between the Night's Watch and Dosh Khaleen.

I really like the idea of them pretending to be husband and wife in order to deceive the three from Qarth. That kiss was amazing. It's nice to see Dany's conflicting feelings for Jorah slowly beginning to take root, even if she's not ready to see them herself. Though I am still wary of Pyat Pree - he was responsible for the dragons going missing in canon, and it seems like Dany's dream of pale men could very well still point in that direction without her yet realising. And what was the dark shadow that Dany saw? Was it privy to their conversation? That could be a potential spanner in the works!