love this
is there a sequel by any chance?

I think this would have (at this point at least) been more sensible if it were put in Charles/Shaw category with a warning on the non-con. I feel the need to search for a telepath to have my mind cleared of this. And I swear, Charles would not walk for days - no lube through the backdoor just...(mind wipe please). Looking past the horror, I still feel the need to finish the story, I terribly want to find out how this gets settled. So God help me for the nitty gritty.

I'm quite sure, Frost can't use her telepathy in diamond form.

I would have rather had something different to happen for Charles to lose his hold on Shaw's mind, something to initiate Erik's not platonic love for Charles, and Shaw's obsession turned lust(?) to Charles but then again the latter could have been from his sort of lobotomy. Otherwise, I think this story is worth the read. I do like this' AU of despair', I've never thought of this sort of plot, it's quite interesting. Your Shaw suddenly feels much too scary, poor world.

Im sorry but you complety ruined this with the rape, the idea was fine but having Charles enjoy it? No way. A man would not enjoy the rape just because the attacker hits the prostate, it doesnt happen with women and the g-spot so why would it happen to men? Really ruined it for me and it was great up until that point.

Oh no! *shriek* Shaw is alive! O.O I gotta admit, I did not see that coming. But maybe this way Charles will be able to regain the use of his legs...? *trails off hopefully*

But oh my gosh, this is intense! Is there going to be a sequel? Because I certainly wouldn't mind one... :)

D: I wasn't expecting that at all. In a good but upset way. I feel that this should continue. ;u;

Well I really liked the story up until that last section. Now I'm completely confused lol what plan? How on Earth is Shaw still alive? And doesn't that mean that the whole storyline has changed since he's going to start WWIII?

I did however like the way you incorporated Charles losing his ability to walk back into the story without it being the bullet.

Will there be a continuation to show if anyone ever figures out if Shaw is alive and to stop WWIII? I'd love to see how Charles and the gang cope with his paralysis :)

But very interesting and you got me to read through 15 chapters lol bravo :)

Despite a lot of glaring errors, the entire time I was like wifndlwlann.

Is there a sequel? I would like a sequel. Imma go check now.

I sound like a blabbering fangirl. Then again, I am.

To keep up with the image: Ahhhh! OMG this was awesome!

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OMG! I LOVED THIS! Everything was so interestingly amazing! I want more erikxcharles and shaw! Jesus your leaving me beg for more! I also wouldnt mind you talking about charlies past life a little more xD MORE!

creepy and awesome story!

Um...wow! This story was absolutely amazing! Sequel I'm hoping.

Thank you for writing this!

I am in love with your story! Its wonderful, so many twists and so much action :D I hope you write a sequel :D

Holy wow. Really, freakin' WOW. That was the most kick-ass/tear-jerking XMFC fic I've ever read, and trust me, I've read quite a few ;) You had such a great grasp on the characters and it was an absolute pleasure to read. I really can't wait to see what else you write for XMFC. Fabulous! :)

Sooo I absolutely LOVED this story. From beginning to end it was fantastic and you really had a good grasp on all of the characters. The ending was one that I did not expect and I really hope that there is a sequel in the future (*gives puppy-dog eyes*). Anyhoo! This was a fabulous story and I am eager to see what else you write for Xmen. Thank you!

~*CS*~