u need improvement in grammar, the story is good though

These few chapters have been very repetitive other than tht it's been good so far

tf

that was a lovely story and I have to thank you for writing it:)

Nice story

waw... so fast... intriguing part.. i like it.

hmm... nice progress... again i like it.

nice progress... i love it...

Much better with the beta

The summary had me really interested (and the 1st chapter was informative if not repetitive). However as I began reading this chapter, i struggled with the grammar. I actually was rearranging and putting in words as I read it (which is really tedious) like I would when I translate Latin. This makes me think that English is not your first language. Could I suggest getting a Beta-reader who is fluent in English to review this story? I will continue reading but I think that would help with what I see thus far.

This story is too repetitive and there are punctuation and spelling errors. Other than these mistakes the story is fine.

you've got a nice story, but it would be definitely better if the format is formal :)

i feel i forget to review on chapter 2 lol

o.o

All I can say is wow. Never been glad to finish a story before. First let me get to how confusing it was to read, grammar please. Second, when writing a story and explaining this, don't copy and paste. I read more quickly as I skipped pieces that were repeated like the story on Sakura and her ex, never being raped and losing the baby an so on. The summary had me intrigued, but the story turned out to be a fail. It didn't help that you jumped from one to the other so quickly. Maybe next time.