Very cute

Wonderful Samchel story. I loved your 'universe' line - thought-provoking for Rachel. Thank you!

THE MOST FANTABULOUS TORY I HAVE EVER READ !
I mean sam was soooo... on SPOT !

This story was amazing. So creative. It instantly makes me think, 'what do I want in my universe?'. It was a really nice way of Rachel and Finn breaking up and her starting with Sam, instead of normal story where Finn breaks up with Rachel and she goes to Sam. I like it very much.

Amazing! I love it! So great

This was sooo great, it was amazing. Thanks for this.

And yea having Quinn get pregnant with puck's baby was pointless. The writers just wanted drama. In the third season i suppose it's more apparent that it helped Quinn grow but not really.

Whatever, so i prefer Sam with Quinn but this was great, i like Sam and Rachel fics too. I absolutely hate finn though.

Wow. I really liked that story. Good job. Keep writing.

I just discovered your tumblr...

Expect random man you barely know from the Internet to be reading it in creepy detail while you have no control over it. Don't worry, I do it whenever I discover a writer has other websites. It's only lead to absolute disaster ONCE!

Ah, Taylor Swift, one of the current powers of our world. Eh, Fearless is something I can listen to once every few weeks. Never one I'd put on a loop though.

Ooh, is that a six word memoir! I didn't know you'd ever done another one. This is intriguing. "Means a lot to me, but not much to anyone else." Well, the memoir was "My Name is Wyld Card 4" but that was inherently unusable. Doesn't make it any less true...

Well, we have a fic to review, blood to spill, and a Rachel Berry to ogle. Possibly not in that order.

("What would your universe be like?")

Hm, would you really want to know the answer?

Long meet cute between Rachel and Sam. Let's see where this goes...

("Apparently he doesn't enjoy it when uppity bitches tell him what to do,")

His loss. MAN that guy needed to get laid (yes, I remember his character arc).

(Finnocence)

Where is that from? Did you make it up?

(Why is a complete stranger nicer to you than your own boyfriend is?)

That's why Finchel failed so dramatically in season two, IIRC. SEEMS to be getting better in season 3, but I trust this creative team as much as I do a sack full of snakes.

In case you're wondering, a snake full of snakes is cute, a lot of fun, and you can all get a ton of enjoyment out of everyone moaning and groaning about it and jumping up and down because you keep talking about it, but would you really trust it with your heart? It will always just leave you in the end...

Thank God I never had to navigate high school lunch tables. Now that I'm in college I just sit by myself and crank the music up. Which is probably not the best idea...

("What's your universe look like?")

Very different terminology then the starting words. Interesting. Is that intentional because of Rachel's different diction, or is it a mistake?

Rachel's universe is sweet. It suits her. It seems like the kind of world she would make. I think I would like to live in her world. It wouldn't be mine, but it's better than ours.

Hm, the commentary on Finn not fitting Rachel's world is rather interesting in the light of the latest episode. This is pretty much what makes Finn scared, IMO.

(It's crazy.

But you're Rachel Berry, so it's probably expected anyways.)

You're a trainwreck, but I wouldn't love you if you changed!

Been ages since I added one of your stories to a favorite. I used to do it all the time, back when I was in love with Jalex. Now I'm just waiting for WOWP to wind down and for OTP to finish so I can let it finally rest.

Well, this works. It's beautiful, in its weird way. I want to remember this one, though why it is better than any specific other fanfic you have written eludes me. But then again, I always wanted to add you anyway, so maybe you're just that good.

I love the ending. I hate breakups usually, but it just worked perfectly here.

I feel content now. Haven't felt this satisfied in a while. I've been happier, but I just haven't felt at peace in a long time. I don't know why, but this makes me feel at peace.

You wrote this on my birthday! BEST PRESENT EVER!:)

ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE! Seriously, I loved it! :)

What a great story. Thanks!

I adore everything about this story, how you wrote Sam, how you didn't feel the need to make Finn seem like a terrible person, the friendship between Noah and Rachel, and even the hint of Quick, which didn't make me want to puke. But my favorite part of all of it was how effortless it seemed for Rachel and Sam to fall into friendship, and eventually something more. And addressing how much it seemed that Noah wanted to be a part of Beth's life. This is one of those stories that makes me feel happy inside, because it's so beautifully written.

I loved this story. I think this is how Sam should have been, too. It is too bad that he was under Quinn's spell like he was. I like that his question led to Rachel really taking a look at her relationship with Finn.

This is one of the sweetest Samchel / EvanBerry stories ever! I love love love it! I just love how you portrayed Sam in this story. :) Please write more Samchel one shots.

i like it