This was really good while it lasted, to bad it died. Anyways, to favorites it goes.

Its quite sad that this story is dead, hopefully the queen took the authors head for stoping just before Horizon

*gravely* - She's Dead Jim

Sad that, this is an excellent story. I rather like your Alice, her powers, and her issues. She seems very...real. Didn't play enough ME to comment on the other Characters. Kelly in particular, she wasn't ever really...well fleshed out...by the game anyway, not the way your primary combatants were at least.

Well put together. Added to my favorites, in case you should ever decide to continue it.

I'm pretty sure her knife is too slow to trigger his shields, they only trigger if the object is moving fast enough.

What do I put into Google to find those photos?

I absolutely LOVE this story! Any chance of seeing characters from other realms making an appearance? You already mentioned that Alice's powers are leaking out into other dimensions (and bravo for turning Alice herself into a fledgling goddess! Awesome!), so maybe we could see some extra crossovers popping up in the story? With the lines of reality blurring, it's entirely plausible that people from other dimensions, both good and bad, could accidentally find themselves in places that they don't belong in. You could even throw in alternate versions of your existing characters...like Fem-Sheppard! LOL!

Anyways, great job so far. Keep up the good work! :)

will there be a next chapter? PLZ LET THERE BE~~~~~~~! ITS TOO GOOD

next?

I can't wait for the Collectors vs Queen of Hearts battle... and the reaction at first to the anomaly most of their sensors consider her. Though I wonder how the Queen fights outside Queensland, I will wait for the battle. But will the Queen bring forth her soldiers to fight as well? What about the Executioner? Will he return? Will the Queen of Hearts mount the Collectors' heads on the wall of her castle? Will she have her fill with this battle, or will she stick with the crew for a long time since she can get a lot of heads in the coming Reaper War? And if so, how will Shepard explain her, or any inhabitant of Wonderland that may appear for that matter?
Will we see a return of the first game's weaponry? I mean it would be useful for Alice to have more options. And would new equipment for her (and maybe the team) appear?

This story is highly underrated. This story deserves to have more attention, favorites and follows far more than the other "top" mass effect crossover stories... I hope you can post an update in the near future.

When I first started reading my expections were extremely low so I was blown away at how good this story is

Nice story, good work. Can't wait for the update.

the characters talk way too formally! even, yes, alice.

A chaper filled with feels! And sadly little else. That was a nice recap of Alice's life but I hope for some action next chapter.

Keep it up!

excellent story as always and now things are doing well on the progress. can't wait for more