this was a really interesting read

Arthur Weasley is a living, breathing contradiction of "wizards understand muggle concepts"

If only I was as fuckin smart as Revelin like

This is beautiful and so well written. I think it might be very possible for him to simply decline Caradoc's offer, if he's so paranoid it would probably be understandable. I especially love the scenes between him and Revelin (I hope I just spelt that write).

The irony. It's too much. Next thing you know, he's joining the Order Of The Phoenix.

So sad you aren't continuing :'(
Great story! I really love the irony

its a shame this wasnt continued, villain protagonists are always cool

it should be cool to see how our villain protagonist runs his double life

dang thats qite a sob story, and all the funnier because of the irony

a battle like that would be traumatic for anyone, let alone a 5 year old child, and while hes smart enough to understand whats going on coping with it is another matter

it should be amusing to see how the death eaters try to excuse their failures, or the athorities react to the number of purebloods who turn up dead afterwards

nice twist youve set up, the aftermath should be cool to see

it should be interesting to see how tom reacts to the situation, a lot of death eaters are going to suffer as a result

hopefully in time revelin will live up to his name and rebell against his shara's ideals,

i take it that revelin wont be going to hogwarts then, not that his education wouldnt be better off without it