| Reviews for Desire |
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ladylaughalot chapter 14 . 7/15 So good, I love it. I’m not sure how I’ve missed your work but better late than never! |
jlove34 chapter 14 . 6/19 I’m really late to the party, but...I absolutely loved this! Thanks for sharing! |
Crossy70 chapter 14 . 6/15 The perfect end! Enjoyed this story with all its twists and turns! |
tneha chapter 14 . 9/19/2019 Woohoo! Awesome! |
genjigod19 chapter 14 . 7/10/2019 Damn. This was awesome as hell! |
BrightSkywalker chapter 14 . 2/23/2019 Just fantastic... This was a very clever way to satisfy every kind of shipper. Well done. I do wonder if BizzaroHermione would miss her sister though... I mean, I know she was her rival for BizzaroRon affections, but still! Part of me feels a bit sad that Our Harry never did wake the F up... |
battybiologist chapter 14 . 1/29/2019 Hm, I think it might have benefited from an alt-Hermione storylinebut I also appreciate that this is a novella so length is important to keep down. Mixed feelings about the ending but you did it well. One other commentthe fight scene could use work, each person's capabilities and positions were inconsistent from paragraph to paragraph. e.g. healing abilities, movement speed. |
cshen.julienne chapter 14 . 7/29/2018 I love it :) And narration's brilliant! Though just a tip. I think it would get you more reviews if you remove the summary in the previous chapters. Because we're just tempted to skip the story and read the summary then move on. Well, that's what happened to me. Still I had to understand the ending. Thanks for writing! |
Eatgreenapples chapter 14 . 1/30/2018 I liked this story it was a cool idea to have the mirror be a portal and I love when Harry and Hermione are together. Thanks for sharing your writing. |
ArtimuosJackson chapter 14 . 1/15/2018 Your story is basically slap to Harry and Hermione romance which indicates that the they can only end up together if Ron or Ginny dies or travel to some alternate reality which made their characters more pathetic than actual books. |
Ravenflight123 chapter 14 . 11/5/2017 this is a lovely story. i always thought harmony was more appropriate than romione in canon. i love how you portrayed all of the characters. congrats on a story well written. |
Noacat chapter 14 . 10/23/2017 Holy shit was this a ride from beginning to end. Thank you so much for writing this! |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 14 . 8/14/2017 An absolutely appropriate ending. Thank you Wings. TGM |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 13 . 8/14/2017 The only decision possible. But all has changed. I don't think she really can go back functionally to that life. She'll find herself in love with that Harry. Who is married and about to have a child with Ginny. However it falls out, it's going to be like the Eagles song: Heartache tonight. TGM |
The Ghostly Minion chapter 12 . 8/14/2017 Good battle. Hermione's realization that she's in love with Harry is the biggest revelation in the chapter. Second largest is finding Belltrix at this Mirror. Clearly, she's trying to find a Voldemort and bring him back. So, they'll have to stop her to use the mirror-assuming that they really WANt to use it now. If they simply destroyed it, and became the couple they want to be, it wouldn't' be a bad ending, IMHO. TGM |