I think this story was wonderful. It captured the Doctor and Rose perfectly. I wish this was an episode :-)

oh. my .god. this was awesome. the story had twists and turns and i was totally captivated throughout. the idea was fresh and imaginative, and the chemistry between the characters was perfect. i commend you. this one of the best short stories on this site.

I liked the last line. Very Doctor-y.

So I think my main complaint was that some of your dialogue wasn't very well identified, and it was a little hard to figure out who was speaking. I would suggest only using action tags when the action actually belongs to the same person who's talking.

Apart from that, great job. ]

NLAKXJNSLKDJNCSLKDJN *fangirl spazum* THAT. WAS. AMAZING! X3 I loved this, I really did! Shame it was only 9 chapters. And ANNI seemed a bit scary. Wonder how scary they'd make her if she was actually in the show? xD

WIN! love it!

So totaly Doctorish, always one to run away but not quite. I can't believe all of that was in her head, well yes I can, but that's not the point.

Good job with explaining what happened I would have never been able to get it straight in my head then tell it to someone. Very good.

Another nice chapter. :)

OMG that ending :o

Can't wait for the next chapter (:

Aaaaaaaaaggggggggg I HATE cliff hangers! PLEEEEEASE update, you're doing good.

Aaahh... Darn cliffhangers. Keep up the good work.:)

Oh my gejeebers... Fantastic writer, you are. Update as soon as you can, and happy Rememberance Day!

I love it when the villain uses their fear against the good guys, true genius.

Please update soon_

This is great! Don't know why I've not been following it more closely actually, because it's definitely one of the better Doctor Who stories I've come across. Well written, strong plot, and good characterisation, and I think ANNI is a really inventive and original concept. Great work and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Ha YES! Did I realy just read your mind? That was really good, most stories I've read here would've had Rose sobbing asking what the Doctor was talking about. I'm glad someone remembers how great Rose was during these situations.

aww. go on and break my heart why dontcha?