The last part just melted my heart

The style in which you wrote this is really interesting, great story, love the way you wrote the characters as well :)

Excellent character depth!

I love the flow of your story-telling. Your abundance of synonyms in parentheses added great depth to your characters. Thank you!

"Looks like it only affects telepaths."

BECAUSE WHY NOT.

I love all your Doctor Who stories. This is my second time rereading (most of them, not this one). My favorite has to be the Damage Control series, but this fic isn't bad so far either. I love the way you write Jack and the Doctor.

Wow. Just wow.

I swear you are my favorite author on this site. Everyone you right is so in character and you have the greatest ideas. I can't believe it took me so long to find this story. PLEASE keep writing, no matter what or how you write

What a wonderfully written story! I especially enjoyed the insights into the thoughts of the characters, it made the story much deeper and allowed the reader a glimpse of what was trulying being thought, instead of only what was on the surface. Thanks for a great read!

This is amazing. Please write more like it.

Bravo! Excellent job, I so love this story. It was a thrill to see every notification in my email. Thanks so much for your work, your care and your imagination...well done!

Please tell me there's more! I absolutely love this story :D

It's about time I got around to reviewing this; I've been following from the beginning and have been hooked the whole time.

Brilliant, both in writing and in storytelling. You've done a great job at getting inside their heads and bringing their thoughts and motivations to the forefront. The writing style you use to portray their emotions isn't one I've seen often, and I think it comes across perfectly.

I think this is probably one of the most accurate and balanced portrayals of these three characters that I have seen in any fanfic, and has a thorough command of emotional torque, because it makes people care about all of them. This is a great fic.

I hate to see him leave...he still needs mending so badly. This has been such a moving story. And thank you for not writing Saint Ianto or Whiny Bitchy 14-year-old-girl Jealous Ianto. Fics like that have done nothing to make me like Ianto, especially the ones that bash the Doctor. (They're out there, sad to say) I have so enjoyed your stories and your characterizations...there are some writers out there that could learn from you!

Again, another triumph! I love your dialogue and stream of consciousness...always happy to see a new chapter.

Even though I'm exhausted I'm glad I read this...this story just has gotten under my skin so much. You've made the characters and their emotions so fleshed out. Good, good work. Thanks, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next.