Incredibly interesting story! I know you haven't updated in quite a while, but I would love to see this story continued.

I really like. It is really hard to find a story that doesn't revolve around Hawke and this one of the better ones I have found. Please update soon! :0)

ooo i am likin this! i like sarain she seems pretty groovy! i hope fenris falls for her and not hawke agen cos despite wat fenris did to hawke she was a bit of a bitch and using anders like that ia also not groovy! so fenris shud get wi sarain! awsum sauce! hehehe nyways keep it up! much love

EPIC story mann! sarain kicks ass! ohh i hope she kicks hawke's ass for being sooo styyyuuuupiid not helping fen!i cant w8 for the next chap!please moree chaps!

Wow, loving this story. The arcane warrior thing sounds really intriguing! Can't wait to see if she catches up to Broody!

Fenris should escape, of course. paulaH