I really got into this. The characterization was on the mark and I could see Tony doing this XD

THIS IS COOL XD I LOVE ROXIS/PAMELA SO MUCH~

But the first chapter prologue...it's still nagging me, somehow. Aaand, Anna and Roxis are cousins? They looked more like...well, senpai-and-kouhai relationship for me LOL

Where's Vayne, Jess and Muppy, then?

I'll wait for the future chapters!

So you really bring alchemy into the fic...interesting.

Anna and Nikki enter the spotlight. Curious how Vayne will made his entrance into the story.

You, sir, using japanese names for the characters is indeed a new feel. Though, isn't Roxis' japanese name supposed to be Loxis? Or maybe my memory just tricked me. Yeah.

Update soon!

Ah. It's a Mana Khemia AU with mystery feel. This. Is. Going. To be. Awesome.

Cheers for another Roxis/Pamela! I just love this pairing. For unknown reason.

Hm. This reminded me a lot of Ace Attorney. But maybe that's just me.

Update soon, this fic looks interesting.

Heeyyyyy~ YOU'RE BACK! About time you showed up again :)

This is insanely good for a first try of this genre.

You put every Mana Khemia characters into their fitting role just right. Though, the Justice Agency name... *snrk*

Ahem. A pretty good start, nice usage of characters, but...

It lacks one thing: Mana Khemia feel.

Asides from the characters used, there's no Mana Khemia feel at all.

The atmosphere feels more like an Ace Attorney or CSI games.

Or are you going to use Alchemy for investigation?

That's good, but... Please add more MK feel to it.

And the tension is quite heavy. Don't forget the humors.

That's all, and keep going!

I'm happy that you're back! XD