Well done! You got the characterizations mostly right (but Shaw's always hard, you did better than I could) and your dialogue is amazing!

This was the best longest one-shot I read on Cherik! And what you did there, on James and Michael? Clever one, you are lol Still awesome

I loved this story when I read it on LJ, and I'm soooooo happy to see it on here, so I can favorite, and read whenever I want.

This is so cute; Chef Erik and Professor Charles. And, ugh, all the X-Babies in the mix, I just can't.

Raven and Hank were just as precious too.

This was AMAZING! I got all squishy at the end and that sex scene was HOT! The way you had the kids plotting to get the boys together made me feel doubly aggravated when they were being oblivious idiots, which is always good. I like how Shaw wasnt some big evil villain, just a bad guy meant to be poked fun at. And I'm pretty sure that image of Charles riding a bike with Raven on the back up to a stuffy university is going to keep me laughing for days! All in all, this story was FANTASTIC!

Loved, loved, loved, loved, LOVED this! Brilliant!

This was amazing!

Absolutely adorable story!

Hey ! I really liked your fanfic, it's so adorable ! Raven and Hank are so sweet ! And they take a pretty long time too. I really liked that the denouement was around a chess game, that's so like in the movie.

Well, I just have to thank you for all the pleasure I took reading your storie. XOXO

PS: I am franch so I apologize for the misplelling in the review.

This was so adorable :3 I loved it, especially the fact that it was a COMPLETE AU lovelovelovelovelove~

adore!

Of course, all they needed to do (and what they should have done from the beginning) was to get them to play a game of chess! 3

I really really enjoyed this. I loved the meta bit in the middle. I loved the fact they worked in a retaurant and I loved Charles and Erik and the scheming and the ending and everything. Great job. This was brilliant.

Cutest thing! I love it~

I love it! So different and wonderful :D

This was really original and awesome! You did a great job of incorporating all the characters in the AU; everyone was in their perfect role. I like that Shaw didn't get extreme about ruining Eric's resturant, that was nice and realistic. One thing though: Since it was so long I think you should have made it a multichapter. That way with periodic updates your story will stay in front longer and get all the reviews it deserves. So again, good job and keep writing. AUs rock my socks :)