| Reviews for Personal Monster |
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an axious apple chapter 1 . 9/27/2013 kawaaaiiiiii! |
GoldenRoseTanya chapter 1 . 5/3/2013 ooooooooooooomg sooooooooo cute! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw |
Sakura478 chapter 1 . 10/31/2012 Aww how cute nice story |
Ksrjah-Sassypringles chapter 1 . 9/30/2012 asdfghjkl;' This was so cute. From the beginning I figured it was some sort of bug because out of every little harmless thing I can picture Lucy being deathly afraid of insects. And then there's Natsu. Mr. Sneaky himself. If Natsu were to ever realize his feelings for Lucy in the manga I feel like he would deal with it like this (all sneaky-I'll make you fall for me without saying anything) or he'd come right say it. So I think you've nailed in In character part of fanfiction right on the head! Off to read more of your stories! |
Suilen chapter 1 . 9/24/2012 Eeeeek, yo también odio las cucarachas, más las grandes, no puedo verlas ni en pintura, soy capaz de lidiar con las pequeñas pero las grandes no las soporto, no desde que una me atacó e.e Fue adorable, me gusto mucho, puedo imaginarme a Natsu perfectamente sacando provecho de la situación, lol. |
Niue Avatele chapter 1 . 9/16/2012 Well, Natsu is one heck of a monster! LoL |
LinkLover123 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012 Cute! |
EmilyAnn003 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011 one of the best NaLu stories out there :D |
xxraimewxx chapter 1 . 8/12/2011 I was laughing when I know it was a cockroach, if it flies I think Lucy might faint haha |
DragonsandInk chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 Haha, I can totally see Lucy being scared of cockroaches! That's so funny, and Natsu is too cute. Poor Happy, he probably woke up and thought 'Looks like Lucy had another cockroach...hey, why doesn't Natsu take me with him!' Probably because Lucy banned him from taking you since you eat all her fish everytime you come over to her Haha, Natsu is sooooooooo cute! It was so romantic, I loved it! |
Mrs. HopeEstheim chapter 1 . 8/7/2011 Well, I found that irresistably adorable. I thought it was a spider at first, but I just grinned even wider when you revealed it was a cockroach. I mean, why be cliche and use spiders? (Even though I freak out about them and probably would...) xD So, I really loved this. :) |
lacie darling chapter 1 . 8/7/2011 I was laughing hysterically when I found out it was a cockroach! But then again I'm the same, I see any sort of bug in the bathroom and I run out,no matter how much I have to go. This is amazing and hilarious, I flipping love the ending (but I was kinda shocked Natsu actually sleeps in HIS house, considering he practically lives with Lucy). Amazingly written :) |
sami.60 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 i really don't know whether to say 'Awwww!' or 'Oooooh heh heh:)' so how bout i just say 'Good job' and i'm looking forward to more! |
Arkytior's Song chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 LOL That was kawaii! I LOVED it! |
Galatians 5.16 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 Awwww this is just hilarious and really sweet! The first part was written so nicely, then the next ones just great. I could imagine it all. : |