(authour has fainted.)

after a few mins...

No, EdWin lemon is easily acceptable, but Al... he looks innocent dammit!

:P good one

Wow! It's nice to see a new story from you after so long! I absolutely loved how this turned out, and I think your writing has gotten a smidge better! Fantastic. :D~ I enjoyed reading it.

~Cookie

Great work! This is really good :D Keep up the good work!

Another awesome chappie! So fun and interesting to read! It was naughty but we all know it's better that way! (my perverted side speaking) Al isn't so innocent anymore...which goes to show you that appearances can be deceiving...haha! So anyways keep going! Write more awesome chappies! :D