This is great.

Original and nice! Thanks for writing this!

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MY HEART. HOLY. SHIT.

*sniff sniff* it's just... so perfect. I honestly love this to bits, second read through and by fucking god. Does it hold up to scrutiny. Not sure how or why, but you made the imagery so vivid and compelling to me. And the idea is so unique! To be quite honest the whole experience feels like a dream. From the way you write them, with time skips and hours used to full potential, to how things almost seem to blur by at times, right down to a bittersweet ending that I love to hate. 3 so much love for this fic, it's certainly a favourite of mine.

It just HAD to end this way, didn't it? Oh god. Why?!

OH MY GOSH! THAT GOT SO EMOTIONAL! But it was a great story. I loved it.

You can't write a story this fucking deep and have THAT as your cover picture

this really fucked me up. great story and all, but i feel like i need to wander down an empty sidewalk and reevaluate my life and existence itself because one person wrote a fic 3 years ago

Wow that was one heck of a fic

Weird as hell. But I liked it a lot. I also liked where you ended it. Even though endings in general suck, this was placed well. Any further and it would seem like it was running on for too long. Bravo.

Wow, man. This, this story. THIS. I can't even begin to describe how amazing this is. It was simple, but I cried so much. Amazing. ;-;

Ehh, I don't know what to say except that this story was good. At first I was like, what's going on? Why's it so slow paced? But then I guess I kinda got hooked on and well, I just think that reading this was very enjoyable. Thank you for writing and posting something like this :D

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. This story... I just want to see them meet and I want them to be happy. Yet they'll probably never be completely happy with how things went. Either way: this is definitely one of the best fanfictions I've read ever. I like how so little happens, yet you make it so exciting to read.

Also, the way you used time was fantastic. Most people would've just written that a lot of time went by. Not done it in hours, and not as well as you did. So bravo, my dear writer(s).

Now I will go to bed, since this fic has kept me up.
Sincerely,
Ellesra

Considering this story wasn't chock-full of action, you made it incredibly powerful. I loved it.