Reviews for The Attraction Effect
H A M B O . 1 7 chapter 9 . 2/27/2019
I am really and I mean REALLLYYYY curious on how Hinata got in partnership or whatever you call it with Orochimaru
TheMightyBoudica1995 chapter 9 . 11/16/2018
I looove the dynamic between these three!
TheMightyBoudica1995 chapter 4 . 11/16/2018
AHHHHHH omgg!
TheMightyBoudica1995 chapter 3 . 11/16/2018
Cool chapter! Even without the bbs sasuke and hina! Also love idea of the modern post-shinobi world you've built!
TheMightyBoudica1995 chapter 2 . 11/16/2018
Chapter 2 and Im hooked! Petrified by the fact that the last update was 2013 though!
TheMightyBoudica1995 chapter 1 . 11/16/2018
Oooh i am hooked!
juliana716 chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
I badly hope you can continue this.. Though I think it's a long shot since it's been years since this update.

I would just like to say this: this is amazing. It has the action and politics of the canon but it has the excitement and freshness of an AU. And I love how the story is being told: a bit vague and little by little, we see things clearly.

And the beauty and danger of Sasuke's obsession for Hinata's affection. I can clearly picture it. It's an AU but everyone is in character.. And I think it perfectly captures the SasuHina feels.

As I've said reÄ…ding the end of this story seems a bit farfetched now and my only regret is not being able to know how did Sasuke became like this to Hinata? Where is Hanabi now? And what is Hinata and Naruto's history?

I think I even like this better than canon.

Though I'm craving for more, I'd like to thank you for sharing this.
Guest chapter 21 . 11/25/2017
I literally stayed up all night just to read this! Hope that there will be more, and thank you!
noodlehaus chapter 21 . 10/26/2016
I know it's been a while since you've updated this story, but I really wanted to say that it's amazing.

I love how intricate the plot is and how it isn't necessarily centered around Sasuke's obsession with Hinata. The whole political conspiracy tied in with Orochimaru's sinister plan is so intriguing that I really want to know more about it. You've written it so well that it isn't convoluted with nonsense but with mystery and suspense.

With Sasuke's obsession for Hinata, I really like how you gave the readers hint and pieces of how it started. What did his mother and Itachi do exactly to Sasuke to make him like this? The whole "If you love something, you take it" deal. Did Itachi do the same thing to Temari? What did Itachi "teach" Sasuke exactly when Sasuke found Itachi in his room with a girl? I really want to see how this is resolved.

I really like the change in perspective between Hinata and Sakura (with the occasional Sasuke and interludes from other characters). It really gives them depth to see how Sakura is clearly losing her mental stability with the secrecy in ANBU and how she really wants to know what it means but is afraid of what it'll hold and how Hinata is now stuck between a rock and a hard place due to her actions.

This story is really well-written and I hope someday you'll find the inspiration to finish it.
Vongola Princessa chapter 21 . 9/10/2016
This is sooooo interesting! The webs woven are so so detailed and I find myself delving more and more into the mystery of it all! CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!
Heise chapter 21 . 3/11/2016
WHUUUUTTT another amazing one! What what what! Ahhh these SasuHinas blow it out of the water! The canon Sasuke changes so much by the ending of Naruto that old SasuHinas are all out of character. It's super interesting to see this Sasuke work. It's really some amazing character building you've done in your two works. I really wanna see how you finish them. At the moment I just kind of picture your SasuHina with Sasuke as a giant cobra coiled completely around and almost strangling some small soft animal to keep her with him. Please don't let them both get crushed... HAPPY ENDING PLEASE! Please please please!
amethystfirechik chapter 21 . 3/6/2016
I really like this story. I can't help but wonder whether it will have a happy ending or a more realistic one where. I hope you continue this.
forgetmenotlovely chapter 21 . 2/1/2016
This is a seriously good story, really unique. I've enjoyed seeing characters from Naruto introduced gradually, and into unexpected, different roles. I like the perverse/controlling/slightly insane Sasuke, though being a Sasuhina fan, I do hope to see their relationship take on a healthier turn. But it doesn't have to because their relationship and emotional struggles are interesting. It depends on how you want to develop it. I'm rather drawn to the darker themes. Usually I find long sentences to be hard to read and detract away from the flow, but here, they serve the purpose of reflecting emotional trauma. I like how Sakura plays an important role, and not just the usual jealous rival. Her sessions with Shikamaru could be drawn out a bit more. There were some really short sections that I found lacking substantial purpose, and could have been used instead to develop the back story. But like I said, this story is incredibly unique, and more importantly, it's captivating. It makes me question the character's motives, and I want to know their histories. I am a fan of the politics, and I find the intricacies are revealed at a good pace. I have said a lot, and I apologize that it's rather jumbled. But I really want you to know that I love this story, and I think it has incredible potential. Hope to see more chapters soon.
AriBerry chapter 21 . 2/16/2015
Ok, I know it's been years, and you're working on a new story. But please finish this! Its good.
laviere chapter 21 . 2/5/2015
I think I am very much in love with this story :)
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