This is a disgrace to the original. It's just filled with horrible emo music. There's only a small amount of metal. You disgust me taking something amazing and turning it into a piece of shit.

The guardian of metal is supposed to be Ozzy not Nikki. Have you ever played the game

what is the song in this chapter

I'm glad with the direction you are going with narutos training of the fox's chakra not enough people have it where he can control that form and it's a shame because it's bad ass. Keep up the good work.

you might wanna make that twenty times now brag

good story loved it especially manda getting decapitated

I don't know if anyone has tried translating the technique mentioned in the chapter near the end, so I did: "Hiraishin-ryu: Kakusui Jikan Shōmetsu"

UPDATE please

First of all, I can't wait to see if the Zaulia are still around. Secondly - OH MY GOD! I JUST THOUGHT OF SOMETHING VERY IMPORTANT!

What happened to the Sacred Beer Tree?

P.S
Did you know the Narrator is a First One? Yeah, if you watch the video of the First Legend you can see him in roughly the middle of the screen when it shows the whole thing towards the end. He's the thing that looks like just a head with a bunch of teeth.

Is the resurrected Minato the new Jinchurikki? Since he sealed half the Kyuubi into himself, and then was devoured by the Shinigami, does the alive him still got the Kyuubi-half inside him?

Is the Guardian of Metal still hanging out in that lava pool? Or did he fade away with the loss of Heavy Metal?

ino, tenten, hinata, anko, temari, hana, yakumo

please update and revive this _

just fucking write more you fucktard

tenten,yugao,tsume,fu,isaribi,yakumo,ino,anko,temari and kurotsuchi:-D.