Update please

I wish you hadn't abandoned this one. It is so good.

That's sexual assault

If you are writing a chapter you need to do a lot better than will put people off then they will think your book chapters are do not want to make them short your shit

I know it's been years but PLS FINISH I READ THE WHOLE THING IN A DAY & I LOVE IT

MY FATHER DIED 6 YEARS AGO FOR THE SAME REASON. HE SMOKED A LOT FOR SEVERAL YEARS. I MISS HIM TOO. HE WAS 65.

Please finish writing this story

FABULOUS I loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooo much!

I'm so sorry about your grandfather! I know how you feel though. My grandfather passed away recently. It's fine about the updating. P.s, pretend I said this two years ago.

Awesome sauce story but one thing. I had surgery on my adenoids (burned out, sadly didn't help), and I think it was similar. Put to sleep, surgery, Blahblahblah. But you described Elena as tipsy, kinda, and didn't show her being in pain. Love the story, but wanted to point that out.

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I can understand that Elena is better then stars, because The stars... Don't you see the fault in our stars too?

Great story, but the burger think kinds offended me. It's basically, "Yum, this use to be living animal that people slaughtered is so good! I love to have animals who have thoughts, feelings, and feel pain. It's so good this cow someone killed!" And that really grosses Me out. I'm vegetarian if you haven't guessed.

Heyyyy, just wondering if you are planning to finish this story sometime in the future... if at all?
If not I'd probably die of sadness because I just love this story so much it hurts!

Gah! Brilliant story. I'm bawling. Truly original and captivating. Amazing job!

Absolutely great chapter!:)