This is an amazing story. Not much more I can say. Amazing job. :-)

:'( Aww no... so sad... I have to say, it was well written though, well done!

BP89 x :)

"Did I make you proud, father?"
"The proudest."
And then my feels exploded.
P.s. If you wanna reply to the review, my fanfiction username is "Pheobetitanessofthemoon1234". I'm just too lazy to log in. Orz.

That was just perfect; so full of emotion!

I've noticed that the problem with this fandom is that so many good stories are ignored. Four reviews? I mean, come on. I almost teared up.

I love the format: the writing tool you've used. Heartbeats. It's very interesting, and you pulled it off. I was a bit worried at first, but you managed it, which is a great feat.

Nineteen seems like the right age. Maybe a bit older? I don't know. Doesn't matter. It was still very believable.

Good work. This is a favourite.

You wrote it perfectly

Wow. I love this! So well written! I wish Lu Ten were still alive! I whole-heartdly agree with the other reviewers! Awesome stuff! I can't wait to read more from you!

P.S. Later today I am posting 'The Tale of Iroh.' Check it out if you want!

awwww... poor Lu Ten... i wish he'd survived to the series... Zuko needed a better example than his diabolical sister and father...

wow! this was sos touching!