Reviews for Orphan to Help |
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Christopher chapter 24 . 3/25/2015 I really liked this fanfiction. I think it was perfect and I hope you make more good ones. |
Guest chapter 24 . 1/21/2015 I think this was a great story and I think you should go into it a little more but that is just my opinion |
greatlordofevery chapter 24 . 11/3/2013 make a story or movie about Leo and Luna. they make love and have sex. goes with the sex education. Leo is so desperate and does it to is "Twin Sex" I will watch/read it and it will be easy to find. please make it soon. |
greatlordofevery chapter 24 . 11/3/2013 hey, can i make a story about Luna and Leo? like have them make love and have sex? you can also make an animated movie. i will definitely watch that over and over again. you stories are great but how about Leo and Luna make love and have sex? that would be so GREAT! |
zumby101 chapter 24 . 5/1/2012 just finished, great story but you didnt have to rush through chapters. Writers are at their best when they take their time and you shouldve taken your time but i digress... great story please keep writting |
SkyValor chapter 1 . 1/31/2012 i like this very much! |
dreamer1821 chapter 24 . 10/24/2011 Wow just very good story it waswonderful to read 5\5 stars !keep writing! |
Jusen-Allxy-11 chapter 24 . 10/23/2011 Cool! I'm sure you did a great job! |
PsychoTeddyARMY chapter 24 . 10/23/2011 it was awesome! i love this story! |
Guest chapter 24 . 10/22/2011 WE NEEDS A LEMON RIGH NAO PLZ. W3 N33DS A L3M0N R1GH NA0 PLZ. W3 N33D5 4 L3M0N R1GH N40 PLZ. |
Seeker Heart chapter 24 . 10/22/2011 Wow i love the great happy ending with those guys:D Keep up you greatest work all the way okay.:D |
jaden culley chapter 23 . 10/20/2011 love the story slightly unhappy that it ends next chapter seems alot to conclude in just 1 more chapter but have enjoyed this story |
deamsey chapter 23 . 10/19/2011 I like your story ts so good make more |
PsychoTeddyARMY chapter 23 . 10/18/2011 hahahaha XD! very good chapter! |
Seeker Heart chapter 23 . 10/18/2011 Wow...that's a big old chp. *New to me sorry* Anyways, i like how the teachers tought the kids about Sex ed. telling them that it is important to wait then right away doing it. I love how the ending turned out. I think it's funny and cute when Leo is enjoying things he shouldn't be anyways it's funny. Keep up the work! |