Reviews for Stalking Zuko
LuvAllPokemon chapter 2 . 8/28
this is hilarious!
Alyce Reide chapter 20 . 8/13
I found several f-words in this chapter! Five. Flight. Falling. Few. Forget. Forgiveness. Fun. First. Friends. Force. Fire Nation. Families. Fit. Fight. Fruit. Fountains. Free. Flakes. Favorite. Future. Fast. Fabulous. Final. Fic. Foot. Famine. I bet that wasn't even all of them, not even counting multiples of the same word (and counting forgive/forgiven/forgiving all under "forgiveness").
It's not until you start counting that you realize how many words start with F.
Alyce Reide chapter 17 . 8/13
Avatar or not, it's not up to anyone to decide someone else's life for them. (Unless you're their parent/guardian, in which case you can for a certain amount of time, but I digress.) Aang does not have the right to say that Katara needs to forgive her mother's killer without ever facing him, ESPECIALLY not when he hasn't practiced forgiving people when it's hard. (He forgives a lot, but, like, only when it's easy. Like, forgiving Katara for wanting to take revenge. WHAT.

Part of the reason I now ship Zutara. Zuko understands- and he had his own moment, when he could have killed the man who destroyed his life (and as far as he knows killed his mother), and chose to walk away. But for both Zuko and Katara, it's important that it was their choice to not take revenge, not something someone else decided for them. Yes, revenge never really helps, but I think maybe sometimes, the opportunity to take revenge is what helps. Especially if you end up choosing Not Revenge.
Alyce Reide chapter 15 . 8/13
Aanglee would be friggin' ADORABLE AND PERFECT AND oh my word that would be a lot of cheerful. Sokka would never be able to visit them.
Alyce Reide chapter 6 . 8/12
I think the name "Gloomy Hairbuns" is ridiculously hilarious, and I very much enjoy your reasoning.

Thanks for the relationship explanations!

Also, yeah, the 'girl as prize thing.' My first time watching, I didn't notice anything weird about Kataang, because I was about 8. Recently rewatched it, and there are so many flags. The girl as a prize. The non-consensual kissing that was never discussed. (Tbh, if I liked a guy and he kissed me on the mouth without asking, I think that would end my crush. It's never happened, but I would not be OK with that! I can't see Katara being ok with it- and she wasn't in EIP! So why did she just forget about that later? (Rhetorical question.)) The part where Katara literally says Aang is like a brother to her. Pretty sure there's more, not even counting the Zutara teasing, but I'm too tired to list them all rn.
Alyce Reide chapter 4 . 8/12
XDXDXD

Katara's falling slowly! I wonder when she'll call him "Zuko"? In her notebook/journal/whatever, I mean.
Zuko's trying.
Alyce Reide chapter 1 . 8/12
No! Of course Zuko isn't adorable! Because he's annoying and Katara hates him still! That's it! He's not adorable at all!
(... someone's in deniaaallll~~~)
(It's kind of impressive how firm she is about Not Liking Zuko.
blahblahbayern chapter 10 . 7/9
Mhhhh, so Katara is still in the denial of her sympathy for Zuko, which is kind of hilarious considering she calls him her Subject repeatedly :D

Lovely chapter! Thank you!
blahblahbayern chapter 9 . 7/3
It was nice to see this drunk side of Zuko in this chapter. I especially enjoyed this moment:
/Subject beckoned me over and whispered quite conspiratorially at me: I think I might be a little drunk, but don't tell Katara. She'd be mad./
That's probably my favourite part in this chapter. Though, I must say, competition with Katara's musings on Mai was tight.

Thank you! ️
Guest chapter 20 . 7/2
I FREAKED OUT when I by god FINALLY read his ACTUAL NAME. UGHHHH.
blahblahbayern chapter 8 . 6/27
The moment when Katara started to refer to Zuko as 'my Subject', ah delicious! She's so relatable in her worries. I'm a bit of worrier myself when it comes to uncertainty. I also like how much she's in denial that she'd grown fond of her Subject.

Thanks for sharing!
blahblahbayern chapter 7 . 6/27
You have no idea how hard the commonsense stick made me laugh. I literally had to take a pause to just breath properly again. Sweet Spirits, that's too good!
blahblahbayern chapter 6 . 6/27
It's amazing how you write Katara. The emotions, her way of thinking, the way she sees the world and people around her are all there, but in a form of stalking reports. And honestly, said reports are so insightful in all things Katara. LOVE IT!
Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 4 . 6/16
Stacks on might be like a dog pile? I love how Katara won't admit that she's developing a crush
Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 2 . 6/16
I always thought that fire flakes were like chilli flakes but in different flavours and different strength burn? But I accept that your idea makes sense too
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