Actually, not bad. You could probably say that the reason Gary fell to the floor was because The TARDIS emitted some sort of frequency that coincided with Gary's frequencies, and made him feel sort of dizzy, and caused him to faint.

Fucking helll did you leave it like that

I like this chapter! Just remember to show, not tell.

Please come back to this! It's good and I'd be glad to read more of it.

Please update! This story is awesome!

I know that you haven't updated this in a while, but PLEASE PLEASE keep writing! There aren't many Alphas crossovers and I really like this one. :) 3

Pfff, he only has one heart. Imagine what Rachel would do if the Time Lord Doctor showed up.
And pretty please, if you can, could continue this? Only if you can. Otherwise, thank you for a great two chapters! I'd never thought of this crossover before. Might have to now :)

that was flipping great but why did you stop? i really wanna know why gary collapsed!

Pleas continue this story. I want to know what happens!

You should continue this.

Omgosj0h! (The errors are on purpose, it shows how incoherent i am, and it has nothing to do with it being 5:35 am)This is awesome!

Sweet

Oh doctor!

good chapters. I had real fun reading them. I think u should continue. Love the interaction b/w the doc and the alpahas

More please!